Gotta review this, the fic has good grammar and the main character is powerful yet no overly so he will have to grow, the interactions seem unique and wonderful and well everything is fine so far just keep it up, love it love it love it.
5 years ago
5
JimmyBlah
Okay so I’m not going to read this until you CHANGE the word in the summary from CHANCE to CHANGE 😂😂 sorry but that’s bugging me, thanks regardless.
~Filler down here so I can submit this~
5 years ago
3
d_dd_d_5656
Good english, Good MC, Good start and so far good chapters, so me likey so me will continue to red UWU, SO KEEP IT UP AND PLUS ULTRRRRRRAAAAA
Gotta say this is good, the English is outstanding compared to many fictions here and the main character is op but noo too much, love it keep it up buddy
The English is pretty good and the main character is likeable, I love it please dont drop it more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
5 years ago
1
I_swear_am_18
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5 years ago
1
pARTYaNIMAL
Welll a shameless review , I’m putting effort on this and improving my English with it, I hope you guys like I sure do with love the authorrrrrrrrrrr
5 years ago
1
Nivastir
Just the first chapter was really good and doesn't have bad grammar.
This novel has a lot of potential just needs consistent updates and it's golden.
Please keep up the good work.
5 years ago
1
Cody_Voyles_4579
honestly this a great book and its gonna go far. it has great story/character development, great main character. it's an all around good book
3 years ago
0
viloh
top stars for now since i still haven't read it , but i have a question before i start reading any RWBY fanfic , is the MC interested in that shit stain ruby rose ? in fact , is he interested in any of the four dumb b*tches ... well , minus weiss , she became toleratable , replace her with the other dumb b*tch who became intolerable , nora
if the MC is interested in ruby , yang , blake or nora then please answer me so that i don't read that sh*t
seriously , i can barely stand them when the story is not focusing on them , if they're romantic partners then i hope to know beforehand !
if anyone reads this then please answer ASAP ! thank you !
4 years ago
0
AldiXanana
Finally there's another rwby fic in this site, i hope the author will continue this story up to vol 7 at least, and not dropped it Midway like the other did
Gotta review this, the fic has good grammar and the main character is powerful yet no overly so he will have to grow, the interactions seem unique and wonderful and well everything is fine so far just keep it up, love it love it love it.
Okay so I’m not going to read this until you CHANGE the word in the summary from CHANCE to CHANGE 😂😂 sorry but that’s bugging me, thanks regardless. ~Filler down here so I can submit this~
Good english, Good MC, Good start and so far good chapters, so me likey so me will continue to red UWU, SO KEEP IT UP AND PLUS ULTRRRRRRAAAAA
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Gotta say this is good, the English is outstanding compared to many fictions here and the main character is op but noo too much, love it keep it up buddy
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The English is pretty good and the main character is likeable, I love it please dont drop it more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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Welll a shameless review , I’m putting effort on this and improving my English with it, I hope you guys like I sure do with love the authorrrrrrrrrrr
Just the first chapter was really good and doesn't have bad grammar. This novel has a lot of potential just needs consistent updates and it's golden. Please keep up the good work.
honestly this a great book and its gonna go far. it has great story/character development, great main character. it's an all around good book
top stars for now since i still haven't read it , but i have a question before i start reading any RWBY fanfic , is the MC interested in that shit stain ruby rose ? in fact , is he interested in any of the four dumb b*tches ... well , minus weiss , she became toleratable , replace her with the other dumb b*tch who became intolerable , nora if the MC is interested in ruby , yang , blake or nora then please answer me so that i don't read that sh*t seriously , i can barely stand them when the story is not focusing on them , if they're romantic partners then i hope to know beforehand ! if anyone reads this then please answer ASAP ! thank you !
Finally there's another rwby fic in this site, i hope the author will continue this story up to vol 7 at least, and not dropped it Midway like the other did