This is a story written by “Writer with bad grammar TT” in (as the name suggests) very bad grammar.
As I lime the story a lot I took it upon myself to make the grammar corrections in it and post it so everyone could read the story.
I am doing the same thing on FanFiction.Net so you can read it there as well.
The title there is “CDECEK” be AV5670
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Overall I find this stupid and idiotic.... 2 stars why?..the chapters are well written and long...understandable and well structured but its stupid why? The MC is an SI...he has had the sharingan for years and could've trained with chakra and yet he dosnt increase his powerlevels, he dosnt even learn senjutsu.....the MC has the E.M.S...yes the E.M.S so how the **** can he be so weak?..I mean if you wanted a weak to strong MC you should've given him something else instead of giving him one the most broken abilities in ALL of FUCKING anime. Moreover the MC dosnt even use his knowledge to do anything..and I think he even told the cast that he is from our world..this is stupid and I just quit reading right there...Judging from the title and the story I'd assume that MC will join a peerage [either rias or sona]... sigh its stupid..look I think that an MC with the sharingan must never have a master, why ..because its in a way stupid..think of it would sasuke or madara accept anyone as a master..no..the author should've given MC some other power Overall this is just like all the fanfics out there [most of em]...MC is reincarnated as isseis brother..MC has some power but dosnt use it well...dosnt become stronger..and like most em out there MC joins a peerage. So I just think that this isnt worth reading... Just my opinion...
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Me gusto hasta ahora si hicieras mas pro-activo, menos reservado en emociones, mas activo con las mujeres en lugar de preocuparse por los enemigos y dejar de subestimarse sera mejor. Doy 5 estrellas para que sigas con el buen trabajo y mejores la escritura un poco pero en general es entretenido, Me gusto mucho.
Well I liked it but the bad thing is that he spends it helping Issei if you put him in the chaos brigade with valí it would be fun to imagine everyone's face besides the exchange can copy movement and also the memory that the uchihas the more they dive into stronger darkness feel