[Indefinite Hiatus] Itachi Rebirth: A Shinigami Tale

At first the novel was amazing but now..... I can't say the same, it's like the author deliberately dragging it. Also what up what mc and his shikai seriously and the author is just ignoring the readers which is just poor effort. Review is based on the author more and less on the story.

Nice I can’t wait to read more. A bleach x naruto crossover at long last. And I like the fact that you chose itachi as the main character instead of Naruto.

Amazing story itachi's character is really well developed. I am enjoying it alot. Also the timeline is really well set up in my opinion. Read it for yourself and decide though because some people that don't like itachi's character might find it boring but if you don't like itachi you probably wouldn't have clicked on the story in the first place.

Itachi is fucking smart ass 1000 time smart than naruto......i like itachi character. ..

This Novel was interesting for the first few chapters, but soon became just a retelling of Canon. The only differences from Canon, are a new side character who has no impact of the story at all. Itachi in this is a poor character, a soulless zombie who allows the Author to retell Bleach, and suck in readers with as little effort as possible. Immensly disappointing, a story afraid of change.

If you want Itachi to do nothing read this, he quite literally trains for 50 years and doesn’t even get Shikai. He is literally a side character who’s fights don’t matter and is weaker then Ichigo.

Aw the ninjutsu kill the novel -_- seriously the sharinggan is ok but ninjutsu? U know reiatsu and chakra is fundamental different and u make it seem like the same, this novel for me is A BIG NO!!! Drop it -_- The start of novel make me motivated to read but now???cant find the motivation to read cause of ninjutsu fking make the story destroyed...GL with this trash story. And u know they don't have meredian and the like , u making this like cultivated novel too for fk ...c'mon man they are soul their body is fundamental different from the living , their body is like a vessel not human body anymore

It's a great novel. One of the most accurate depiction of Itachi's character. Although it's only 9 chapters the story development is good, neither too fast nor too slow. Overall it's great and it can easily become one of the top ranking novels if the author continues to write with same quality, quantity and stability..

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Changed my review since itachi is literally a side character now. The story started off good but then the author just keeps nerfing him, adding more side characters, retelling the bleach story with itachi helping ichigo since itachi is a side character... he has been reading for YEARS and still has NO reaction to even unlocking his Shikai which is pathetic since he was a prodigy at the start of the novel and in his past life lol wish I didn’t end up reading

Writing Quality : 3/5 Overall it's good, but the fighting scenes still lack a bit of intensity and suspense. As for the surroundings, they are not detailed enough. Stability of Updates : 4/5 There is no schedule, but the author upload at least two chapters per week. Story Development : 3/5 The story is going well but the flow is inconsistent because the author is shackled by the original story so he restricts himself to follow the canon. Character Design : 2/5 First, the author focuses on the main character and the others are not developed enough. Then, the author chose to take Itachi as a main character but it doesn't seem like he has a total understanding of the character as the philosophical and loving side of his personality are eclipsed. World Background : 3/5 The world is not explored and the author keep himself in the known part of Bleach without innovating and creating new places. Conclusion : Even if it's interesting, I don't think the author should have taken Itachi as the main character because he's really complex and too difficult to use since he is worshiped by the readers which cause them to have too much expectations for him. I think the author should have tried to appropriate the world of bleach by trowing away the original plot to build his own story.

Author is a Mong, good idea, great ambition, till later when it's just a slug to get through. Heck I rarely skim read anything, and I have to do that. Too much is practically copy pasted, and whilst I would love to see this novel become something great, I can't continue reading it if the Author does nothing to tell the readers that he at least has a plan or something.... The author doesn't interact with readers, and quite frankly it's a disappointment. It really had a great start, but author made the OP character Underpowered and tries to showcase that he's strong, but doesn't do anything but drag Itachi's carcass along miles and miles away... To new comers, I will continue reading for a while longer, but if the author doesn't give the much needed boost in power within chapter 70, then I'm going to drop it

Itachi shouldn't have killed his parent and his own people, all he had to do was join force and annihilated konoha kagure, sadly he wasn't a good son, and rated to do the worst thing ever, please kill him again and let his history fade away to the dust forever =(

started really good, but then a 44 year or smth time skip passed and Itachi still had not gained his shikai, or even spoken to his zanpaktou. Then OG plot started and it got even worse, with Itachi being nothing more than an inconsequential side character that has made no change to the story. His ninjutsu attack does nothing most of the time, being more of a small distraction than anything else. This story had so much potential and could have been something amazing, but it seems like the author is just going through the motions and is just writing to write. There is no joy there anymore.