SPIRIT WARRIORS
The whole world was destroyed, with nothing left but blood, dead bodies, and destroyed buildings. The demon lord had already opened the gate to the underworld, gradually fusing the underworld with the human world and spreading his corruption
The spirit of silence was devastated and the spirit of comfort was dead. It seemed all hope was lost, but the spirit of rage had one trick up his sleeve. He learnt a technique from his teacher which was used as a trump card only when things went really bad, but it was forbidden.
And when he did that he met a guardian who have him a challenge . In order to save his world, he had to both win the challenge and beat the demon Lord by all means and make the world a better place.
All he had to do was to start all over.
BUT,
WAS THIS A GOOD IDEA?
wow, this is one of the best novels I have ever read. the storyline is interesting. this book made me committed to continuing reading can't wait for next chapter .keep up and fighting
Its a good story... keep it up, make it even better. The more you publish, the more you write. I'd like to know if you borrowed from a certain culture.
The story starts off slow with a seemingly ordinary MC. The world seems normal, but the main character's memories clue us in that not everything is normal. The synopsis sets the story up for a big payoff and I'm looking forward to it.
The story is amazing. Although, the story is slow pace but you definitely have some magic with words. A beautiful story. Update soon. Can't wait more!
Interesting book. I like the direction things are going Please work on your updating stability and grammar to make this book amazing. I like the character designing and world background. Nice book and really interesting
Let me tell you I am never a fan of destruction, anime, or something like this BEFORE. Melchiah is definitely being one of the strongest characters we come across. The story pace is a little slow yet interesting. This is my first try for something like this but trust me, I am enjoying this experience so far. Well done, wasn't aware you are such good writer!
Can't say much for now, it's still early... However, I do find the characters rather ,interesting and mysterious; and the story no less makes me beg for more. However (this is for the benefit of the author): He has to improve on his grammar (though he only needs a few tweaks here and there. Nonetheless, it something developed as time pass on, it's supposed to be not forced, so keep writing author! 👍 Writing for us writers is full of trials and errors so keep going.... That's all SecretMemories out...
Again. Just suiting the readers . By being a reader......... never mind. I have corrected all the mistakes in the previous chapters (almost all) and made sure I didn’t make such mistakes (maybe
All though I wrote it, I want to suit the readers so I'm going to rate it fairly.so although the writing is good, stability of updating is not so good so I will try to improve on it. Thanks
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Dang this is so awasome I am hooked... the story line is intresring and good the main lead seems cool after all he is the spirit of range💜I am looking forward to this novel.
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The story is looking great so far. Great start, I haven’t seen anyone start a reincarnation novel like this before pretty original. Keep up the good work. I can see a lot of potential in this. Great job!
author, I loved the prologue so far. this book has the potential to keep writing and updating. waiting for the next chapter. lots of love .fighting author