A Gravity Fall and Harry Potter Fan die and gets reincarnated with ? wishes They Will all learn about Bill Cipher...... Stay tuned because it's about to get weird.
Well the idea, the concept is very interesting, but the story seems like a joke, so I must assume that that was the idea or that it came up when you wrote the story, it is supposed to be a rewrite, well then my advice to you is a new rewrite, but get help or co-write with someone with more experience, because the idea is good and well developed, it could easily be one of the most viewed favorite fic ... of those who like HP and Gravity Falls
5 years ago
3
D_REAPER
I really like this book so far just tone down the crazy a bit . Can't for him to start dating rose and Hermione 🤘🤘🤘🤘🔥🔥🔥🔥😎😎😎😎😍😍😍😍💞💞😀😀 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~`~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~``~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~~~~~~~~~~~~
5 years ago
3
Darkmusho
Love it keep up the work......................................................................................................................
5 years ago
1
A_British_Person
The book is a train wreck, and i love it for that....
Writing quality- 5 stars
Updating stability- 5 stars
Story development- 5 stars
Character desgin- 5 stars
Wolrd backgroud- 5 stars
4 years ago
0
Sakumo_Hatake
I love the character design for the human Bill.
The fact that he is over-powered is amazing as it sells the fact that he is Bill. Overall pretty good so far.
P.S- EXP
Well the idea, the concept is very interesting, but the story seems like a joke, so I must assume that that was the idea or that it came up when you wrote the story, it is supposed to be a rewrite, well then my advice to you is a new rewrite, but get help or co-write with someone with more experience, because the idea is good and well developed, it could easily be one of the most viewed favorite fic ... of those who like HP and Gravity Falls
I really like this book so far just tone down the crazy a bit . Can't for him to start dating rose and Hermione 🤘🤘🤘🤘🔥🔥🔥🔥😎😎😎😎😍😍😍😍💞💞😀😀 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~`~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~``~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`~~~~~~~~~~~~
Love it keep up the work......................................................................................................................
The book is a train wreck, and i love it for that.... Writing quality- 5 stars Updating stability- 5 stars Story development- 5 stars Character desgin- 5 stars Wolrd backgroud- 5 stars
I love the character design for the human Bill. The fact that he is over-powered is amazing as it sells the fact that he is Bill. Overall pretty good so far. P.S- EXP