Akatsuki in Fairy Tail

Note: This is a critical review. It is not meant to bash, flame, or otherwise negatively affect those who are interested in reading, those who write the book, or are otherwise partial in this matter. WritingQuality: 2* I give the fanfiction a two star because it’s all dialogue. Now, why is that so bad? It’s. Literally. All. Dialogue. So far, at least. Everything happens too fast, also. One moment they met a god, next their blowing a hole in a f*ucking mountain??? Also, be warned! The author uses a cursed style of dialogue as well. He: I like Pizza Her: Me too! I wish that style of writing would be burned and thrown into the abyss already! Oh well, it’s not time for my plan to be complete yet. Anyways, moving on. StabilityOfUpdating: 4* This has updated 1/2 days I’ve had it in my library. I personally can’t say much more than that, but for now it is a solid four in updating stability. On to the next one, shall we? StoryDevelopment: 3* Again, the plot moves too fast. The Akatsuki are doing 10000 hours a second and it should slow down a bit. A rewrite or hefty edit is in need, imo. CharacterDesign: 5* You already know it; The Akatsuki have already been fully fleshed out in the original creation. Although the ROB, (Random Omnipotent Being,) is not well developed it is still acceptable and will not bring down the score. WorldBackground: 3* Now, why would I rate background so low after stating my reasons for character design? Because, the author has note done it well. The author has, however, worked on characters a bit. So for now, World Background is a three. Overall: 3*

This is great. I love how the akatsuki act like family and are working together to do world domination. I think I will write a story about this and this is really good

It's nice to have a new story than the MC is good and cunning and new fresh novel is good this is new to me and the viewers plz update more this is to entriging to read 😁👍👍👍👍

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Wow such unsual Fanfic! The author really doing it great. Thanks for writing this.............................................................

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This really doesn't get the credit it deserves. I really hope this would be continued tho... Its one of the few fanfics that arent written horribly or half heartedly..

This was one of the better ones I’ve seen and I really like the plot of this. I can’t wait for updates and how the story progresses.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍