Journey Through Potterverse

This book has too many mistakes......ie: MC dosnt want to grab attention, but dude just blurts out how he knows about magic and has visited the leaky cauldron, , BUT it is explained, HOWEVER , its still unrealistic as MC was a kid, and I dont think they'd allow a kid, especially a muggle born to wander around, author should've instead made some BS about MC being a metamorphosis instead, or something else instead of what he did....... Then theres the fact that this dude learned the mind arts by going to knockturn alley and buying books, How the hell would a muggleborn kid with no money afford that ****.... also MC says he knows his fathers childhood friend and yet the MC didnt even know his own fathers name till chp 3.........MC dosnt seem smart nor does he seem as though he thinks **** through...I suggest a re-write and fix yur mistakes author...GL 2 stars..cause so many flaws, not in english but rather the story