A MULTIVERSE TRAVEL

Good English and good story, can’t ask for more... don’t drop it and like one of the other reviews said take the negative comments as a way to improve.

Smart protagonist check, some op abilities check, so far this checks for everything I like, good English check.

I'm in love with the book.

Ill be the first review 😋 also try not to get discouraged by negative comments by others use it as words of encouragement to better yourself and learn from you're mistakes

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The best naruto fanfic I've ever read!! Man this one is soooo good to read. so much pleasure. faceslapping those bítches and showing whose the boss... ahhh so much pleasure~~~ This is highly recommended.

One of the best ! Thanks for the good work sensei ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta. Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta. Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta. Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta, Me encanta.

When I saw the title I thought it was gonna be bad, turns out it's great. Love it 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

It’s my story what did you expect.... I love it hahahahahaha.

AMAZING, the English is acceptable and great if compared to the other fanfics people have written. The update according to the website is fantastic at 19c/week. The story development is the greatest part of this novel as it has been clearly thought through. Character design is above average as the Main character is smart but realistically smart, all of his actions make logical sense. Furthermore, the side characters also have their own characteristics instead of just being disposables. Finally, the world background is very impressive as the author has given lots of thoughts on the suitability of the world compared to the MC’s progress. P.s the Mc isn’t a wuss(so he kills ppl) and the story has pretty nice humour here and there. Thx for reading my review and I hope the author doesn’t drop this

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So far (14 chaps) the story is good overall, but there're some common mistakes like name mistakes, some typos. A really big problem is you don't really describe appearances of the characters from the anime. Peace

Love this story. Don't drop please👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍