Mc is a whimp.
He just apology and is too excited.
For example ms marvel insults him and he asks her for not to hate him and wants to be friend .
Just an over all beta MC.
5 years ago
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Dreck_Black
the story is very interesting I hope you continue with the great work
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5 years ago
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MimicReads
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5 years ago
0
Jaso_White
Very good story the idea and very interesting I hope you don't let the story fall
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5 years ago
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JamesBlack
good story
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5 years ago
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Dragon12233
great story keep up the great work
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I loved the story I hope you keep writing I'm looking forward to more chapter
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5 years ago
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Logan179
good story i'm looking forward to reading but chapters
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5 years ago
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Jaison2863
Very good story I hope you continue with the great work
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5 years ago
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_James_Jones_
Great story and the first time I see a story like this
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Mc is a whimp. He just apology and is too excited. For example ms marvel insults him and he asks her for not to hate him and wants to be friend . Just an over all beta MC.
the story is very interesting I hope you continue with the great work •×ווווווווו×וו•×•×וו•×ווווווווווווווווווווווו×ווווווו×ווווווווווו×וווו×וווווווווווווו×
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Very good story the idea and very interesting I hope you don't let the story fall •×ווווווווו×וו•×•×וו•×ווווווווווווווווווווווו×ווווווו×ווווווווווו×וווו×וווווווווווווו×
good story 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
great story keep up the great work Cncncnnfnfnfbcbcbdjddjjdhshgwkajsgdurnrhrjrjfdjdjgdehsjsjejdjjfjdjdjdjdhdhhurrjrjrjfjhffjfjdhbsgasksjdjdhdhdhfhfhfhfbfbfhfnfnfkdjdjdjdndmdmdjdjdnfjfhfjf
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good story i'm looking forward to reading but chapters ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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