I Have A One Piece System, So Why Am I Not In One Piece?!?!
Ace, like most anime fans, imagined what it would be like to be in an anime world. He always liked the idea of sailing the Grand Line and being free out on the ocean searching for treasure the most. Once he finished his daydreaming, he would, unfortunately, have to tell himself that it was just a dream. That all changed one day when he went to sleep and woke up in a different world. Ace thought his dream had come true, only to realize everything was not exactly as he had hoped.
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Authors Note: Hi everyone! This is my first work on WebNovel, so please let me know what you think! This story takes inspiration from "Different World with Naruto System". I plan to take a different route in most aspects. The most notable changes are that the MC will have a One Piece system in a western fantasy world with swords and magic. There will be a romance aspect but no harem. Since is this my first work, I'm open to any ideas and I hope you enjoy it!
*Disclaimer*: Anything related to One Piece and the franchise does not belong to me.
Credit to "Tantaku" for the cover:
https://www.deviantart.com/tantaku/art/One-Piece-Strong-World-Fanart-327668336
Decently written, has a decent plot,[u can guess it by reading the title]............look all I ask is that you dont do something retarded and neuter MC, cause One Piece world is kinda OP. Plus MC's fruit, dude should be OP cause in the OP world a normal dude would probably be strong as a weak vice admiral from the GL, cause I mean it is OP, plus here in this new world no one would be able to touch him..he'd be OP, so yah dont neuter MC Suggestion: dont make MC a naive friendly retard, make him think **** through, make him smart secretive and OP, but make him hide his powers and not behave like a retard and show off...add some romance and fluff, just build it...dont make some shallow ****,,,and no moms or wives... anyway GL
Very nice. Now to make sure I hit at least 140 characters I'm gonna "sing" a song, Ahem; Oh baby, baby Oh baby, baby Oh baby, baby, how was I supposed to know That something wasn't right here? Oh baby, baby, I shouldn't have let you go And now you're out of sight, yeah Show me how want it to be Tell me, baby, 'cause I need to know now, oh because My loneliness is killing me (and I) I must confess I still believe (still believe) When I'm not with you I lose my mind Give me a sign Hit me, baby, one more time Oh baby, baby The reason I breathe is you Boy, you got me blinded Oh, pretty baby There's nothing that I wouldn't do It's not the way I planned it Show me how you want it to be Tell me, baby, 'cause I need to know now, oh because My loneliness is killing me (and I) I must confess I still believe (still believe) When I'm not with you I lose my mind Give me a sign Hit me, baby, one more time Oh baby, baby (oh oh) Oh baby, baby (yeah) Oh baby, baby, how was I supposed to know? Oh pretty baby, I shouldn't have let you go I must confess, that my loneliness is killing me now Don't you know I still believe That you will be here And give me a sign Hit me, baby, one more time My loneliness is killing me (and I) I must confess I still believe (still believe) When I'm not with you I lose my mind Give me a sign Hit me, baby I must confess, that my loneliness is killing me now Don't you know I still believe That you will be here And give me a sign Hit me, baby, one more time.
tbh I haven't read this fan-fic yet but I've been searching for a novel to read that hasn't been dropped and that is why I'm giving it a 5-star review.
Honestly this is just simply a great novel and I was loving where it was going. The spelling and grammar is probably some of the best on this website, I have found very few mistakes and even than you wouldn't notice them unless you paid attention to extreme specifics. The story development is honestly great. MC got strong pretty quickly but everything after that had real pacing and timing for everything. It had perfect interruptions sometimes between stuff in the story that it would make it feel like some of the good real novels out there. Though I feel like the MC had a too much or a sudden change in personality considering he had trauma before but suddenly it disappears. Overall everything in this story is absolutely great and near perfect but it didn't get anymore chapters for months now so it's dropped. Sad, because this was definitely one of the best.
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Writing Quality: Excellent (On a site where 3/4 of the fan-fics start with a run on sentence, taking me out of the story, this is pretty good.) Stability of Updates: so-so Story Development: The story has been going in a good direction so far Character Design: Good World Background: Excellent (One thing I can say is that its always good to keep a little bit of mystery. It helps bring about a sense of excitement when you find out more about the world and its characters.)
A brilliant plot, that is much different than the traditional One Piece Isekai Fanfic. Also the new world background is also extensive and properly depicts the background of how the world develop and how it is and it is not simply black and white.
Need more chapters.............................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I just discovered this and i am enjoying it so keep up the good work auther sama
Enjoying the story so far! Hopefully the author will keep updating! Good stuff !