God of Vampires

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i'm going to be shameful just this once and rate myself. i hope you love it. drop a review if you do! this is my first novel. i won't say my English is completely good but what i write is twisted and cunning evil.

So. Im sorry to give this book such a rating, but heres why: 1. It is very rushed and quick, the mc could destroy an entire world in a few hundred words. Something like that could deserve more detail and words, it could also make the book better. 2. because of my first point, the world and character development suffers a bit, you dont get to know the enemies so well, and the mc could use some more introduction at the beginning. 3. the chapters are to short. the chaoters are always about 600-700 words. its not that big of a problem, but a bit longer wouldnt damage the book. 4. The story. I cant tell you how much i like the idea and the base of the story, but because of the points i made and some smaller mistakes, it isnt used to its full potential. Now at the end i want to say, i havent read the book in its entiry and it may change in the chapters i have yet to read. i can also understand the „mistakes“, writing a book isnt that easy. Still, great work author!

Writing quality is good. The update stability is pretty good. The story is developing and progressing at a reasonable pace and the character design is relatively ok except the mc goes insane on small things. The world background is great because it sucks you in and makes you feel as though you're there in the midst of all the action and world-building that takes place throughout the story. So overall its a pretty good novel as of the latest chapter.

Your idea certainly hits me in the right spot, but after continuously pushing myself to read until it got better, I dropped it. The novel idea is good, but has no development at all, the MC used 4 hours to turn an entire village into vampires, understandable, but there could have been more detail in it, even the interaction with that village elder lasted one second, might as well have not even shown it, and also, after that, how is everyone fine with that, being turned into a vampire against their will, there wasn't even any confusion after it happened its like everyone just accepted it. Also, you didn't even explain anything about the castle, all you said was it looked magnificent, floats, has a lots of rooms, and has windows. Then the final turning point was when he said get ready for war or something, there was literally no checking on the army, no checking what they were invading, no details about the army conditions, and a lot more stuff. I know this story is probably just the author writing the stuff they want to write, and this could have been a fun read despite everything listed above if there was actually development in the story. Your story has potential though, keep working hard.

great novel the only thing bad about is that u already made him to op from the beginer like creation and immortality i think u should tone it down a bit

the story is good but it is going to fast and the mc is to op i don't mind the opness but that is just to op i mean he could basically just say kill all bings and they would die not the tipe i like

Love this book, keep up the great work. I will support you jajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajajaja

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Its really amazing but i feel like you ( author ) could have done a bit more with the world background but other then that i really enjoy reading this book. 😃

꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!

Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!

Can you please make more chapter's it's interesting but you update to slow so I can't enjoy it so please update it 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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