Messing around in the Naruto world
Author: Maximus50000
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A guy dies trying to save a person. He meets god and get's a couple if wishes and gets put in the Naruto world.
I am mostly writing this for fun and experience so don't take it too seriously. Just letting you know there may be some plot holes, anyways critical reviews are appreciated. Anyways, I will try my best with this and I hope you enjoy.
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One of those I rebirth so I must Stick with the canon MC, we are best buddy ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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dejaste un poco ambigua la batalla entre hiruzen vs danzo oye añadiras romance ? i si es asi a quien ademas debes profundizar en los personajes
no abandones que es una de la mejores de naruto que hay buen comienzo pero falta desarrollar mas algunos personajes pero en general muy buen fanfic