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It stars off good but soon developed into a drama filled mess of catch the rapist and Dumbledore bashing with a poor harem story mixed in. The main plot is done very quickly with no problems for the MC leaving with a feeling of nothing to look forward to except more of the same drama crap.

Great job again on this fan fic .Its hard to come by such stories with perfect lenth and grammar and character development .I came here after reading the previous one and the magic is still there.

The writing quality is really great and the story is written really well.... However the story's content itsepf is garbage **** and it has really unnecessary bashing of dumbledore I mean a little bit is fine but this story does not just have a little bit of it. The updates itself are okay.... I don't really want to wrote anything else for this review so in general the story is written extremely well but the story itself is really bad

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Okay. Author is one of the best writer i know in the forum. Even across forums. This novel has potential. Writing style, world building, plot making, character building, and many more one of the best I met so far. The author commitment to end the story is well known. You should check his other book.

It's fantastic can't wait for more definitely recommend reading it 🐍⚡............................. .. .. . ................ .. . ....

HOLY SHIT THIS IS EPIC! I am a fan after just one looooong azz chapter! And most importantly it is a HAREM!...........................................

very good, good grammar is long chapters. for those who do not like to harem the other story of this author has only one romantic pair (It was already complete with 69 caps if I'm not mistaken

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Writing Quality ~5 Stability of Updating ~5 Story Development ~3 Character Design ~2 World Background ~1 Here is my Review: The First two are self-explanatory, like usual! Story Development: The Story is generally really good but we skipped 7 years and a few months in 1 Chapter, seems a bit rushed even when the Chapters are really really long! You could have skipped a few months ever so often and tell what the Mc was doing ! We don't know anything of what happend in the 6 years between Anyway..... And the Telekinese is bull**** ! As If everybody has Telekinese but no one knows of it. It would have been Discoverd long before Harry! It makes No Sense at all. It would be okay If he were the only one to have it but he tells every Person he met how to get it ( close people but he nevertheless tells it nearly everyone he knows). Character Design : Well, I can't see how the Mc is our Harry Potter . The Mc is suddenly intelligent, Scheming etc etc . He is a Gentelman out of nowhere and intends to get a Harem ......the Harry I knew didn't even have the guts to Talk to girl... Then there is Ron, I don't like Ron, mind you but Ron is Harry's friend for 7 years and Harry knows him very well. And Harry suddenly calls Ron " a son of a Bitch" and tells him that he won't Talk to him ever again" And the best is, IT's because the Halloween Event that already happend before in the Life before this . He knew Ron's character ......and he acts like Ron has rape his mother, not like that's possible .... Snape is also written badly, like that's not Snape in any way ! Snape is a calm Person..and not whatever the Snape in this Fanfic is . World Background: It's HP ! Would have been 5 -Stars , I mean what is there to complain about but your Telekinese Made the World Background to 0% Review End! Ps: Keep in mind that I only read to Chapter 2, also English isn't my mother language!

Thanks for the good work sensei I 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Please dont stop if you can, take it farther ?? .............................................................................................

Don't be discouraged for the seemingly small amount of chapters they're humongous and every bit of amazing. A whole new take on the HP world plucked out of a series of What if? He was smarter, he was more ruthless and he was prepared most of all.