Gameboy Tomboy
Author: CrnOcylom
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This story is well written and has a good development for both the characters and background. With the way this story going it will be a huge hit. Hope to see more!!
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This is a f*cking amazing story the description of his powers is fantastic. Love it, please continue. Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
It's alright, it's just that their somethin weird about it. I don't know what it is but reading it feels fake. I think it might be the overly detailed monologues, or your not giving the characters emotions. Either way it's not bad, kinda different but I do like it.
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