This review is only for up to chapter 5, It is what you would expect from a reincarnation+system story.....The chapters are a bit compressed and rushed but I am guessing it is to get out of boring story content faster. If you have not read the original story you WILL NOT be able to follow this fan fiction as it assumes you remember the cannon....over all I put it in my library and you should give it a shot!
5 years ago
4
Tonyorobsky
Too many things are quickly brushed aside, there is no proper sense of time passing or distance traveled (lack of descriptions). The guy is quick to reveal his true cultivation when he doesn’t need to. He killed without trouble despite being a transmigrant from the modern world. It’s like he had always lived in that world, and is only interested in passing the canon events (lack of character design and development).
Waiting for the continuation of the story.
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5 years ago
0
Kurdi123
Why has the MC chose such TRASH Wishes, he could wish something like the ability to steal Divine Body or Bloodline Powers and make it his . And the his ability to make to make Resourses is nothing Special, after all when one is strong enought one can make Cultivate Resourses easy
5 years ago
0
Delem
My great master I will tell the next story
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5 years ago
0
Bala_Prakash
Not bad.........................................................................................................................................
5 years ago
0
Delem
Sir, please continue the story.
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5 years ago
0
Delem
Dear writer, I hope you do not forget this novel, please continue the story.
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You are doing great and I want more chapters (just don't tire yourself) with harem 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍
5 years ago
0
Delem
Interesting story I myself really like, respected writer It is impossible to satisfy all parties so I hope you can continue the story without worrying, just write what you think is good.Thank you very much🙏🙏🙏
5 years ago
0
NeroZun
Reincarnation - Check ✓. System - Check ✓. Harem - Check ✓.
A good Mga novel indeed, but better add some conversation and the pace somewhat too fast
5 years ago
0
_Cooldude_
A good MGA story with a good mc who isn't stupid like the original mc. Just hope it won't be dropped like the other MGA stories.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This review is only for up to chapter 5, It is what you would expect from a reincarnation+system story.....The chapters are a bit compressed and rushed but I am guessing it is to get out of boring story content faster. If you have not read the original story you WILL NOT be able to follow this fan fiction as it assumes you remember the cannon....over all I put it in my library and you should give it a shot!
Too many things are quickly brushed aside, there is no proper sense of time passing or distance traveled (lack of descriptions). The guy is quick to reveal his true cultivation when he doesn’t need to. He killed without trouble despite being a transmigrant from the modern world. It’s like he had always lived in that world, and is only interested in passing the canon events (lack of character design and development).
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Waiting for the continuation of the story. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🤗🤗🙏🤗🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Why has the MC chose such TRASH Wishes, he could wish something like the ability to steal Divine Body or Bloodline Powers and make it his . And the his ability to make to make Resourses is nothing Special, after all when one is strong enought one can make Cultivate Resourses easy
My great master I will tell the next story 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Not bad.........................................................................................................................................
Sir, please continue the story. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Dear writer, I hope you do not forget this novel, please continue the story. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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You are doing great and I want more chapters (just don't tire yourself) with harem 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Interesting story I myself really like, respected writer It is impossible to satisfy all parties so I hope you can continue the story without worrying, just write what you think is good.Thank you very much🙏🙏🙏
Reincarnation - Check ✓. System - Check ✓. Harem - Check ✓. A good Mga novel indeed, but better add some conversation and the pace somewhat too fast
A good MGA story with a good mc who isn't stupid like the original mc. Just hope it won't be dropped like the other MGA stories.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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