A man is transmigrated in Douluo Dalu 3 world with the powers of Okhwang from God of Highschool. First novel, please cut me some slack. Trying to improve.
Incredible, something different from what I'm used to seeing, I was tired of seeing MC otaku or hunting women like pokémon, finally it's one without a harem, it's very refreshing
5 years ago
117
Fir3Cooz
Very good fanfiction which changes others with its originality, like a MC who does not know the world in which it is, powers quite interesting if they are developed. I only hope that the author will not be the type who abandoned his novel after 20-30 chapters because he really has the potential to be one of the best fanfiction of Douluo Dalu.
5 years ago
46
Zeno
In my opinion, there is not much point in having an "MC" who has not read the two novels / stories, and who has no idea of the power he has or the world he is in, as the "MC" is now It is known how the story will unfold, the actions of the "MC" become a little predictable, which makes him boring.
- More interesting, or better, would have been if the "MC" knew the power he had, and the world he was in, because he could take advantage of several opportunities that would benefit him, I think his actions would not be as predictable, since at Having knowledge, he would develop various plans, which would make his career interesting.
- Instead of the third eye granting you an overwhelming power so suddenly and using another type of energy, it would have been better if it was your second martial spirit, having two super quality spirits (the eye and the sword), you would have a innate power of 20 !, their third eye and sword if they had the same abilities (the abilities they have would be their basic characteristics) and the two martial spirits can be used at the same time, but the power they can exercise is minimal by the current power of the MC, and the stronger the "MC" becomes, the more power he can use, until he reaches the "god" rank and the MC is if he is super cheated, in addition to his spirit / soul rings, giving additional abilities to his spirits than they originally have. I think this would have been better, in addition to creating a beautiful jade armor, entitled "Jade Emperor".
- I don't know what the author thought, but in my opinion it would have been a better integration of the powers of the "Jade Emperor" in the world of Douluo Dalu as I explained,
5 years ago
25
SweetName
More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee!
5 years ago
17
ImProcrastinating
This is definitely one of the best fics out there so far, even if there is only a few chapters. It’s also one of the only soul land fics that doesn’t have a harem, which is great.
I’m too lazy to write a full review. Just know that it’s a good story if you like smart MC that doesn’t follow cliches.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻to you author.(you get 5 thumbs up because I need to reach the character minimum)
5 years ago
9
TabooExistence
Amazing book plz more !! good job author plz continue it.
One of my favorite fanfictions of all time. Reason? It actually did the romance and badass moments right. Op mc? Check! Troll mc? Check! Secret Organizations for mc? Check! Likable female lead? Check! Fluff with female lead? Check!!!! Seriously author I admire that you didn't fall and listened to the harem readers and the haters of the female lead. Well anyways keep up the great work and plz stay with fluff cause i'm a bit scared of the note you left in one chapter asking if we like "tragedy".
4 years ago
5
lnbane
The story is phenomenally well written, and that is saying something considering how over powered the jade emperor’s powers are; the author has found a way to not limit his power but give it to him in a way, that grows with him.
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5 years ago
5
kingfish_01
One of the best soul land fanfic ever😍😍😍
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4 years ago
3
sayanth_sk
I absolutely adore this fic...the pacing is good...there is a right balance of action, comedy and romance...and yea romance is actually good it's so fluffy and I love it...the world feels alive and the character interactions feels natural unlike in some novels where the interaction feel completely robotic.. keep up the great work author
4 years ago
2
ElionAVL
Honestly this fanfiction is one of the best I've read on WN.
It gives great references, there's lots of comedy, mc is op but doesn't really mess up the flow, the romance is one of the best parts (Even if they're just kiddos rn (At least MC 'is'))
Huang Yu is a very good mc who fools around for giggles and ****.
I hope the author doesn't abandon this story.
Incredible, something different from what I'm used to seeing, I was tired of seeing MC otaku or hunting women like pokémon, finally it's one without a harem, it's very refreshing
Very good fanfiction which changes others with its originality, like a MC who does not know the world in which it is, powers quite interesting if they are developed. I only hope that the author will not be the type who abandoned his novel after 20-30 chapters because he really has the potential to be one of the best fanfiction of Douluo Dalu.
In my opinion, there is not much point in having an "MC" who has not read the two novels / stories, and who has no idea of the power he has or the world he is in, as the "MC" is now It is known how the story will unfold, the actions of the "MC" become a little predictable, which makes him boring. - More interesting, or better, would have been if the "MC" knew the power he had, and the world he was in, because he could take advantage of several opportunities that would benefit him, I think his actions would not be as predictable, since at Having knowledge, he would develop various plans, which would make his career interesting. - Instead of the third eye granting you an overwhelming power so suddenly and using another type of energy, it would have been better if it was your second martial spirit, having two super quality spirits (the eye and the sword), you would have a innate power of 20 !, their third eye and sword if they had the same abilities (the abilities they have would be their basic characteristics) and the two martial spirits can be used at the same time, but the power they can exercise is minimal by the current power of the MC, and the stronger the "MC" becomes, the more power he can use, until he reaches the "god" rank and the MC is if he is super cheated, in addition to his spirit / soul rings, giving additional abilities to his spirits than they originally have. I think this would have been better, in addition to creating a beautiful jade armor, entitled "Jade Emperor". - I don't know what the author thought, but in my opinion it would have been a better integration of the powers of the "Jade Emperor" in the world of Douluo Dalu as I explained,
More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee! More pleaseee!
This is definitely one of the best fics out there so far, even if there is only a few chapters. It’s also one of the only soul land fics that doesn’t have a harem, which is great.
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I’m too lazy to write a full review. Just know that it’s a good story if you like smart MC that doesn’t follow cliches.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻to you author.(you get 5 thumbs up because I need to reach the character minimum)
Amazing book plz more !! good job author plz continue it.
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One of my favorite fanfictions of all time. Reason? It actually did the romance and badass moments right. Op mc? Check! Troll mc? Check! Secret Organizations for mc? Check! Likable female lead? Check! Fluff with female lead? Check!!!! Seriously author I admire that you didn't fall and listened to the harem readers and the haters of the female lead. Well anyways keep up the great work and plz stay with fluff cause i'm a bit scared of the note you left in one chapter asking if we like "tragedy".
The story is phenomenally well written, and that is saying something considering how over powered the jade emperor’s powers are; the author has found a way to not limit his power but give it to him in a way, that grows with him. 123456789101112131415161718192021222324252627282930313233343536373839404142434445464748495051525354555657585960616263646566676869707172737475767778798081828384858687888990919293949596979899100
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I absolutely adore this fic...the pacing is good...there is a right balance of action, comedy and romance...and yea romance is actually good it's so fluffy and I love it...the world feels alive and the character interactions feels natural unlike in some novels where the interaction feel completely robotic.. keep up the great work author
Honestly this fanfiction is one of the best I've read on WN. It gives great references, there's lots of comedy, mc is op but doesn't really mess up the flow, the romance is one of the best parts (Even if they're just kiddos rn (At least MC 'is')) Huang Yu is a very good mc who fools around for giggles and ****. I hope the author doesn't abandon this story.
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