Please Love Me More
Her only wish is to be with her mother on vacation but it seems like destiny loves to play with her.
She is craving on finding someone to love. Can she find it? Or until her last breath she's still thirsty for it? She hopes that someday someone will save her ... someday.
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As time passes by, she grows open-minded and above all strategic in life.
She thought that her life would never change, that until her death her mother would still control her life.
Until one day she met a man.
‘Is this going to change my life? Is this the sign Lord?’
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"I love you."
“No, you can't. Please, don't ”
She was surprised when he kissed her suddenly.
“Why did you kiss me?"
“That's my way on showing my great love for you."
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She cried silently at her room. Grieving for what happened.
‘If only I knew. If only I could foresee the future I would not have done that.’
Every time she decided to end her life someone will always came and saved her.
‘I should not give up because I will leave someone hurt.’
She is Laila Alexandria Garcia and there is no Garcia who doesn’t fight back.
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Note: This is new and original story.
Everything written here is not a translation from other novel.
The story line is interesting, and the characters unique and of their own. There is so much room for the readers to wonder and imagine the next parts while waiting for an update. I look forward to reading more. Update soon!
I imagine that you poured your soul into the writing of this piece, and the authenticity shows. The writing loosely follows a conventional short story structure, but the focus is on character more than on plot. Nevertheless, you have unified the elements
The hype around this book has been unquestionable and, admittedly, that made me both eager to get my hands on it and terrified to read it. I mean, what if I was to be the one person that didn’t love it as much as others? (That seems silly now because of how truly mesmerizing THUG was in the most heartbreakingly realistic way.) However, with the relevancy of its summary in regards to the unjust predicaments POC currently face in the US, I knew this one was a must-read, so I was ready to set my fears aside and dive in. That said, I had an altogether more personal, ulterior motive for wanting to read this book.
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Nice, the typical life of a province girl and first time going into the city. I don't know if this is based on real-life or not but it's amazing how you depicted each scenario. Let's see how well the story improves as the story progresses.
The emotions was perfect jt gets the readers filled with it. I recomend this for some readers if you actually want to have your emotions peaked. Keeep uo the good wotk author more chapyers ill keep reading this love it
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The first draft is just you telling yourself the story. You don't start out writing good stuff. You can always edit a bad page. Start writing, no matter what. Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works.
Ouch i'm very inspired of this story supposedly i'm crying after the end of the story so this story is very nice no one can beat this story and thank to the creator of this novel BIG THUMB
I like the story ... I thought only Cinderella suffers in that situation but I guess the author experienced too. Can't wait for some twist of this. Keep it up!
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Nice work author. Keep it up! Sana mabigyan ito ng pansin ng mga mambabasa. I'm here to help aspiring authors! God bless you po. Don't mind the surroundings at magfocus ka lang sa ginagawa mo.
Nice work author. Keep it up! Sana mabigyan ito ng pansin ng mga mambabasa. I'm here to help aspiring authors! God bless you po. Don't mind the surroundings at magfocus ka lang sa ginagawa mo.
The love that the author poured into her story is super duper great! It makes me wonder why would she wanted to die, and I am sure there is one person there that is willing to survive the death for her! That is so cheesy.