Power hungry person decides that the main character hasn’t used a tiny bit of his potential. After reincarnation, he believes that he will get all the itches and become overpowered, maybe rule over a country or two.
Thanks for the positive support. I realized that my style of writing matches the pokemon world very well. Throw away one-demential characters, summary like story, minor time skips and lots of plot holes. It’s basically perfect for me.
5 years ago
29
VinixxVidixxVici
I am considering to go to avatar world next. He will be reborn as aang after the ice berg incident. The world will be sokka gendebent Tom boy with shy katara in normal life and slowly badass katara
5 years ago
14
Osiris_Anubis
absolutely LOVE this fic and cant wait for more. IM NOT JOKING I WANT MOREEEEE. ugh I loved it so much. I agree with all your points at the beginning as well. please tell me if you are doing single chapter uploads or chunk uploads and if you have a schedule for updates
5 years ago
6
Havengi
The stupid description killed me. Just that sentence alone makes this a 5 star novel in my opinion.
5 years ago
5
Phoenix_Paradise
As much as I love the summary can there be a bit more detail. Still going to read though, seems like a good read.
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4 years ago
4
OtakuReverence
Everything In The Novel Was Ok Except The Writing Quality (or whatever you call it) To Me It Was Really Messy And It Ruined My Reading experience
5 years ago
3
SUPREME_OVERLORD_3770
JUST HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS FAN FIC (LIKE MOST OTHERS DO) AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT
NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥
5 years ago
3
ThatsClassified
I was confused why I dropped it when I read the first chapter but after like 2 more I understand why........ started off decent for webnovel chapters but there's just flight character bashing and unrealistic character interactions
4 years ago
2
BrownOptometrist
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5 years ago
2
Snowy_Crystals
Author-san!! Don't mind the low score I'm just balancing it out since u gave yourself 4 5-star ratings yourself. But the fanfic is still really good!
5 years ago
2
Outcat1234
Good story. The writing is a bit fast paced and the charecters are pretty nice. Overall not bad but please for the love of god get a proofreader or something. The grammar isn’t bad per say and there are only 1 or 2 mistakes in a chapter but still it annoys me
5 years ago
2
SANX100
It's so-o-o-o-o-o-o coo-oool[img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend]
I really liked this version of Pokemon! In the original, everything is more boring and monotonous and Ash is dumb there. Doesn't change at all!
4 years ago
1
VinixxVidixxVici
Author here. I forgot to say that I will be uploading one chapter daily and that I will only be writing two stories at any one point in time to prevent exhaustion. The next story will be avatar the last airbender but that will only begin after my other Harry Potter fic ends. That fic is on chapte 33 and will end soon on around chapter 50
5 years ago
1
Arch_Prime
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5 years ago
1
VinixxVidixxVici
Author here. Thanks for the support on this story . Please let me know if I can make it better in any way shape or form. I appreciate any and all criticisms.
Thanks for the positive support. I realized that my style of writing matches the pokemon world very well. Throw away one-demential characters, summary like story, minor time skips and lots of plot holes. It’s basically perfect for me.
I am considering to go to avatar world next. He will be reborn as aang after the ice berg incident. The world will be sokka gendebent Tom boy with shy katara in normal life and slowly badass katara
absolutely LOVE this fic and cant wait for more. IM NOT JOKING I WANT MOREEEEE. ugh I loved it so much. I agree with all your points at the beginning as well. please tell me if you are doing single chapter uploads or chunk uploads and if you have a schedule for updates
The stupid description killed me. Just that sentence alone makes this a 5 star novel in my opinion.
As much as I love the summary can there be a bit more detail. Still going to read though, seems like a good read. ------------- Filler for word count ------------
Everything In The Novel Was Ok Except The Writing Quality (or whatever you call it) To Me It Was Really Messy And It Ruined My Reading experience
JUST HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS FAN FIC (LIKE MOST OTHERS DO) AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥
I was confused why I dropped it when I read the first chapter but after like 2 more I understand why........ started off decent for webnovel chapters but there's just flight character bashing and unrealistic character interactions
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Author-san!! Don't mind the low score I'm just balancing it out since u gave yourself 4 5-star ratings yourself. But the fanfic is still really good!
Good story. The writing is a bit fast paced and the charecters are pretty nice. Overall not bad but please for the love of god get a proofreader or something. The grammar isn’t bad per say and there are only 1 or 2 mistakes in a chapter but still it annoys me
It's so-o-o-o-o-o-o coo-oool[img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend] I really liked this version of Pokemon! In the original, everything is more boring and monotonous and Ash is dumb there. Doesn't change at all!
Author here. I forgot to say that I will be uploading one chapter daily and that I will only be writing two stories at any one point in time to prevent exhaustion. The next story will be avatar the last airbender but that will only begin after my other Harry Potter fic ends. That fic is on chapte 33 and will end soon on around chapter 50
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Author here. Thanks for the support on this story . Please let me know if I can make it better in any way shape or form. I appreciate any and all criticisms.