A System for the Prince of Darkness

Well this novel so far has been amazing! Very well written and described. I was completely focused on it and it even took my attention away from work xD In my opinion it is a must read!

I like this new story adventure. almost feels like I am attending a Dungeons and Dragons session. Having a Kobold as a playable character is a new twist from the normal route. usually they are considered pests to be wiped out as a new starter quest . awesome twist.

I like how you made the level up system for this character! I really love the main character and how he evolves through out the story. Keep up the good work!

Amazing concept and story so far. The character and plot has a lot of potential in it and I hope you keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love all the stories you come up with. All the story characters are vibrsnt and entertaining. Cant wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome writing.

I always look forward to new stories from the author. He never disappoints me and I can’t wait for his talent to spread far and wide so that others can enjoy his work.

PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP!!!!!! THIS SERIES IS HUGELY ENTERTAINING NEED MORE DND LIKE NOVELS IN MY LIFE THIS NOVEL IS HUGELY FUN TO READ!❤❤❤❤❤❤

A system for prince of darkness great story... Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing Amazing

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good job, I am really enjoying this story and I hope you don’t give up, it’s very well worked and I like the direction you’re taking, please continue the good work.

A System For Prince of Darkness Reading the initial three chapters has led me to the conclusion that this is a great story! Chapter one alone can have you rooting for the protagonist, a young man who had lived a harsh life except for the comfort of his favorite game. When given a chance to change humanity while not being part of it... he becomes a kobold. Good System - Yes! Great Writing - Yes! Best Author - Yes! The first three chapters, and even the first one is crucial to hooking the readers and showing off the wonders of the story... the author did an amazing job!

So far its pretty good. Id like to see how Kaz deals with an opponent more skilled than himself. Although Im noticing that Kaz as a kobold is seemingly more effective in a fight than those who have joined him. I do see some minor errors but nothing too big its still easily understood.

The system is a seat and a lot of traits, recovery, body, strength, constitution, intelligence, size, beauty, etc. Why? I think if you made the system like the Custom Made Demon King system for those whose system did not endorse it, you can modify things like drawing extra sides, making wings more sharp, drawing wings, or even building Things like a gun, a demonic fruit, or a bloodline change. I know the explanation is very bad. You don't need to tell me.

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