Conqueror

Hello everyone! Yrythaela here, the author of Conqueror. We finally finished the 4th Volume of this book. The 5th volume will be starting tomorrow. I'll continue to do better as you have said in the reviews. Thank you everyone, for reading my book.

It turns out that the voice that he heard was in fact just the early signs of schizophrenia rearing its head, so he died for nothing at all. The end.

This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over. This book is so good that my thumbs are twitching from excitement to read the next chapters so I accidentally copy and pasted this over and over.

it has great potential but there are some things that are just stupid why this novel is bad 1 abilities are op when they are just common example: an archer goblin has a skill that makes you invisible If you are still and not breathing I said why it is op in a paragraph comment when it got introduced(it basically is perfect for ambush hiding and confusing your enemy) archer goblins have a skill called archers reinforcement or something it gives an enchantment to ALL weapons not only bows all weapons a sage has a skill that shows every living being in 100 meters ( it hard counters assassin's with stealth making them useless and remember this is a common skill and there are like 5 more ranks) 2 the mc can hit small targets from a distance with a bow without missing when it's the first time that he uses one ( he doesn't have any skills that help with aiming or stats that help yet) the same with a sword he became an expert with 1 hour of experience 3 I found an exploit 😂 when he enslaves a monster ( with a skill) he can give it a name when it gets a name it evolves meaning it gives more xp when killed and also gets an additional skill which he can devour 😂 my opinion of the novel: if you don't care if the system or character makes sense read it if you don't like bad quality go as far away from this piece of art :)

I just can't man, has been a while since I read such an unabashed power trip, if it's what you set up to write author more power to ya, I'll just stop here, this LitRPG system makes no sense to me.

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well its exactly how I rated it....good grammar and update stability but the rest is really bad...it looks like the author is not older than 14(max) ....to many discrepancies ...

honest to God this will degrade your brain cells until there is no brain anymore if you're going to ask why just read to chapter 7 and you would get it I definitely can't keep reading for the ones who giving fake reviews shame on you😂😂😂😂 anyway don't take my word for it just read a few chapters and you'll see

It is not a bad story, but it is a weak story. It develops too quickly, besides that many things are a little pointless, a historian, apparently without training or one, becomes a specialist in fighting and things like that from one moment to the next. It is a story to pass the time and for those who do not care about an empty reading and without depth.

The story could be built up better. Nice concept, but you ruined it with your how you started. You could have made it less cliche, but even if you had to make cliches couldn't you have made them better? If you want to make cliche stories, make good cliche stories. Don't make it a half assed effort. You could have made it better but you ruined it. Disappointment.

To be frank the only good points of this story is the update rate and writing quality but thats about it. story development is insanely fast with no detail whatsoever not even in action scenes. the characters are bland even the MC there is little if 0 character development and even with his life in the line he wants to be peaceful like huh? Overall not recommended unless you just dont care for quality and want a quick read i cant enjoy it cause of that no thrill about it or emotion just meh...

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the system is very convenient, it always says everything the protagonist needs, he doesn’t need to think, the levels don’t make sense the protagonist in level 1 can beat a group of goblins with levels between 5 to 15, because several classes it’s obvious which he will choose. it was better to just be born with it. I scored 3 because it has a certain potential, I will continue reading

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