Golden Dragon (DC Universe) (Dropped)

So, I'm doing it! The shameless author review! I don't think my fanfiction is the best or will be the best as I'm still figuring things out, but I believe that it will be one of the greatest! I'm a proud disciple of the Harem Sect and will enjoy writing my MC getting with some of the most memorable gals of DC whether they be villains or heroes. So, come down and strap yourself in for the long ride! Thank you for the support so far!

I like the story overall but can the MC stop being a fucking idiot simp you travel to the DC universe with the inheritance of a golden dragon and you ***** and moan for 8 months he clearly know the DC universe is very dangerous and the first thing you do is tell Batman your identity then take a bullet for Harley even though he barely knows how to use his power at all it's just fucking stupid

First real conversation the mc has with batman he tells him he isnt from this world also his personality sucks and he has been in the dc world for awhile but has literally done nothing.

great premise and idea but you're mcs personality is a major turn off and is ruing the story so I won't read this anymore until a major personality overhaul and plus I hate heros.

People give 5 stars to everything without explanation, so don't bother about 3 stars. The stories are interesting but the MC the central axis of it is annoying, irritating, stupid, lazy, stupid, loudmouth, did I say stupid? Because it's stupid. I don't understand the authors' fetish lately of making the MC a complete garbage ... The rest is fine ... I think.

MC is the type of person who; refuses to train, avoids getting power, ignores advice, is retarded. Not to mention this is another typical harem trash fic.

Why I drop this story? Is simple: Ivy hates MC Ivy saw Mc cultivating Ivy have 4 orgasms watching Mc cultivating even she hating him Ivy decide to have *** with the Mc while he cultivates... I need more reasons?

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The start was a little shacky. might just be me not understanding how the main character could wallow away for so long. also not really a fan of those types of stories, read enough of them in spacebattles. the rest however is coming along nicely. could We get a chart of the main characters abilities? Cultivation novels tend to go of the Railes.

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