Monarch of The 8th Sin

Superb storyline with father-daughter duo, which is an excellent trope in my opinion. On top of that, I found no grammar/ punctuation errors as well as the words making the characters feel alive. You have a gem in your hands author, and I hope you continue to keep up the good work ! （╹◡╹）

This is my first time reading a novel tag as Magical Realism, and I'd say it's quite interesting plot you got there. It only has one chapter and it's too early to give in a thorough review, but you have a promising start. Keep updating!

Oi, why you lookin at me like that? Every writer would think their work is perfect, so don't judge me. Muahahhahahah!!!😸 And besides, It was quite a ride wasn't it?

The story is interesting and not bad. I’m a sucker for family closeness stories(I am a family based person lol). You done a good job on the world building. There is a few grammar mistakes that can easily be fix by rereading the story. Other than that, keep up the good work!

Alright, Author really cool story you got here good concept, good characters and good writing! It was quite the read, the only downside would be just 6 chapters (as of writing this) wich is a shame really. Anyways keep'em coming!

I must say, you've got a great start, Gaure. I like your writing style, especially how I can understand it well. I can't assume as someone to be an expert on writing novels but I have read sufficient number of books to be called a bookworm. And I can say that I have great expectations in this book. Gaure, I'm looking forward to it.

So far so good! I hope you carry on releasing! I can't wait to read more of it!

I'll be honest, this kinda reminds me of Seraph of the End with the premise of a group of people chosen in a cataclysmic situation that's uprooted all of humanity. It's early, but this so far has potential.