Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Author: Alexander_the_grey
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A young man reborn into his favorite world.
He was granted some request after his death, but the problem was that the granter had no control over how those request were to be granted.
Watch as he grows from a single boy in the dark to a protector who wishes to light the path forward for the magical world one step at a time.
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I just couldn’t read other fanfics cause this idea just kept ringing in my head.
It’s my very first time writing or posting anywhere.
And I obviously don’t own any of the settings, but so what? I’m doing cause I felt like it and for the fun of it.
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hmmmm i remember this one is at 3.9 the last time and my review also got deleted, or the creator make a new account and repost all the chapter and seeing it was posted 3 days ago i might be right. p.s the mc is a beta character
a well thought out and we'll executed fanfic. the story is about 30 - 45% canon and the rest is original. a good MC that, although helps others, is still not naiv and can deal with threats. excellent grammar as well as spelling. side characters are OC and has personal development as well as play a good role of the book, but not so much it outshines the MC. Ps. nice romance as well, not rushed but not prolonged, and got built up well.
Hmmm I still remember a few bad review in this section Hmmm I still remember a few bad review in this section Hmmm I still remember a few bad review in this section
i dont know whats going on this is definately a copy of the muggleborn conspiracy. the author doesn't even hide it. Author of this Novel:Alexander_the_grey and MC of Muggleborn Conspiracy:Alexander Grey. Thats not to say there are no differences between the novels its just not enough to count as a seperate one. This feels more like a rewrite with slight alterations.
An copycat of muggleborn conspiracy but with flat storyline,no significant conflict,Op wannabe mc where he just got power from the so called dark ritual,and where everyone is fucking good guy
Finally there is a Harry Potter self-insert fanfiction with a good dumbledore and MC that explores magic. Author, what is the update schedule for this??
A properly done Harry Potter Fanfic. It’s an amazing read and I highly suggest reading it if interested in the slightest bit. Nothing to complain about at all, except that he doesn’t give Sol enough time within the book or showcase him enough even in private which I would enjoy. Overall it’s amazing.
I want to give power stones to this story. But it is not available. I want to give power stones to this story. But it is not available. I want to give power stones to this story. But it is not available.
10/10 Would read again. In fact I’m going to do just that. And before you ask, yes i did read 130 chapters in one day and yes I’m Going to do it again today. 🙃
This fanfiction feels extremely familiar to a fiction I've read before. Not exactly the same but it uses a lot of stuff from other works I've previously read. The Magical Core concept of cores being "leveled up" in the same manner as the states of matter "gas to liquid to solid" I've read before elsewhere. The concept of "MC is a kid so hires some downtrodden people and uses wealth acquired to form an organization that leads muggleborns and maybe magical races is also pretty much ripped from that previous work. I just wish I remembered the name of that other fiction. Anyways I'm not sure if this guy jus ripped off that previous work I mentioned or he is the author of the work I previously read and just re-wrote the whole thing. It just feels like this is too much of a copy of something I've already read.
Writing Quality - 3 Stars Story Development -2 Stars Character Design -1 Star Updating Stability -3 Stars World Background -1Star Writing Quality [ not much to say here, Prove reading is not a thing here, and yeah, not bad otherwise ] Story Development [ I don't see the Mc getting more mature and it has some Chinese feeling in it but I doubt that the author is Chinese. ] Character Design [ Well, the Mc is just pathetic, and having secrets is not existing here. I mean, Why tell his friends everything about him and Giving people he just met and threatened his bank acc where they can get money from is also not intelligent! The Mc is also hyper cringe and a hypocrite. To his friends, I have some things I also don't tell my friends and they are a lot less important than those things in the Story. I mean, we are in a world where people can read minds so....keeping secrets even from friends is important! etc etc ] Etc Erc, I am too lazy again, like always **: English isn't my mother language so don't blame me!
It's very cliche. I won't get into very much, to avoid spoiling it, but he's bonded to a Phoenix, and is selling it's tears to gringots before he even gets to Hogwarts. Also, he has a custom wand. The characters are poorly developed, but the grammar is decent.
Your typical power fantasy Gary Su kind of story. The main character is popular, good-looking, talented, kind, and every other possible good trait one can possibly be. His only hardship was the one year of torture he endured which literally did nothing to affect his personality, and after that, he's basically given a smooth ride through life with no conflict whatsoever. The idea behind the story has potential, but the almost stagnant development behind the world and main character make it borderline unpleasant to read.