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somehow it feels bland.. relationship developments, interactions, etc. are imperceptible and tasteless..

Just so you know I'll not bash this fic. Truthfully speaking, the story is bland. The author skipped the whole lookism story from the get go, it makes me think author reincarnated MC just only for the sake of gaining Logan's body. The interactions, dialogues, description is seriously awkward. Its kinda you know reading something without any emotion in it. This just doesnt make you feel anything thus what I said bland. I hope to see author improve as the time goes on, its rare to see a fanfic with bulky power type MC, most we read are just athletic refined agility type MC. But yeah for now, this story is just bland.

I absolutely love this book. Eventhough it is the newest one you have started working on, it is already my favorite one from you thus far. please keep up the amazing work.

If you're looking for a great story where the mc actually has a personality and it's not a copy and paste story with new characters this is for you. The Author occasionally gets things wrong but not everyone can remember every little detail. The pacing might also give you wipe lash but this next arc seems like it won't have that problem so no worrys there. Although the Author seems to have a problem with avoiding anything even remotely "cliché" he has actively abandoned ideas if he thinks they are cliche later which isn't healthy for the story so if you read this Author don't worry about cliches so much just don't dump a truck load on top of your story.

Owh?? New story from you?? Throw out more chapter then!!! Thank you for giving us the new fic.. I haven't read it yet, but if it's something like toriko, then it's good..

like someone else said b4 me everything is pretty good but the romance / relationship is just a bunch of girls and him fucking each other and that's it ... its not an harem well its what you would call "modern harem" maybe ? . where the MC is just fucking but his companions is like oh i wonder what girl you can pick up so i can devourer her as well "so its not really an harem at least not he´s one? and the girls are just fucking each other nonstop the dude is just there "what it feel´s like" .... so for those who want the mc to have harem will have to look somewhere else it is really one piece robins harem welp that's just my opinion I'm a firm believer in a harem the girl/boy should have his or hers boy/girls for himself and not share

I really enjoy this story and I really hope and pray that it continues until completion because its unique and extremly enjoyable. I would recommend this story to be read if anyone cares for my opinion.

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nice character story the MC is a brawler like MC that no need for weapon to fight he use trow and submission and grappling to win I want to see the MC trow an overpowerd villain in the ground like a garbage bag

this is not for me it turn into a sh*t-show very quickly, there is a lot of typo's there and then also the author seems to not even know what the character that he writes, because the MC obtained Kim Doo shiks Physiology(from God of Highschool) and somehow that's weaker than people from Lookism and Onepiece and there is a more inconsistency but i'm not gonna bother listing it here. anyways it's too bland and boring also don't expect me to give constructive review on this one cause i treat FF all the same no matter how good they are all of them are trash in my opinion. also for those readers who keep spamming 5 star i just hope you get cancer or something worse and die also your family should die lol cause i hate you guys🤣

Haha this novel really does have fallen do you know the reason haha you fucking give tsunade to taichou haha i know it might sound idiotic but it is the true reason you know why because to put harem tag in this novel and you know many readers always wants if their is a naruto world the mc always gets trunade and you disappoint those man of culture out their

Stupid, shallow and hollow. Interaction between characters liveless. Idea behind bulky gangster mc, seems like a stupid joke from Era of anime, where every stupid things was animated without thinking, but oh well. How he's martial arts can be as powerful as ninjas with chackra? Who knows? I don't... Either way, I wouldn't mind such stupidity if story was at least interesting, but that just like a joke, that you never going to tell people because you would be too ashamed.

I just came back online baby! This has potential to become one of my favorite fanfiction in my library. Hoping the Author will not quit that's all =recommend]

in my opinion you should change the cover to something more atractive, i think that you will have a lot of more readers like that and later they will stay because of how good is the story