Danmachi: True Demon
Author: JackbladesFF7
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The start is very interesting and have a lot of potencial
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I love what you doing with the story I hope see a lot of it keep coming. The only advice I have is to pull back on the overpowerness of the mc a little. as struggle makes for good writing. if you already planed for that perfect.
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