“Obsessed”

This is a really good read. I like the characters, they're well ddeveloped.I love the writing style. I like the mixture of boys love and mystery. This book has a lot of potential. Keep it up Author.

Some grammatical errors, but other than that, I highly recommend this novel. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

I love ittt. Mix of BL and thriller got me immediately adding this to my collection. Those texts in parentheses, you can put it in the author's note so it won't interrupt the reading. Spaces after commas, proper punctuations are needed. Also, not too much capslock, instead, just use (!). Wall of text should be cut, too long of a paragraph. Just need some more edits. Setting that aside, I really like the plot. Been reading too much sweet BL and I need a change 😆 This book is perfect for what I am looking for. Very nice but the cliffhanger tho :< Still 4 chapters and I am looking forward for more! 💖

I love the choice of words and the description used although there were some errors I will definitely recommend it. Keep it and keep updating!

I'm obsessed with this book. (See what I did there?) But in all seriousness, this is a great book, and I can see other reviews stressing about the grammatical errors, which is true. [img=recommend]

Cant day much because the book is still on the initial chapters but i liked the book so far. The plot intrigues me. I would love to read more. Keep updating.

This novel is ingenious. The novel has some grammatical errors that can always be fixed, but overall, I can sense a big plot coming up and I can’t wait for the writer to post more chapter.

The story was really well written, I really enjoyed reading every single chapter. It was one of those books that you can't just stop reading.I truly loved it great job.♡

Just finished all the chapters. So far I've spotted a few grammatical errors, but I'm sure the story will get better with time. Plot seems intriguing so far, can't wait until the actual 'drama'. Please update more so I can do a further review.

This book is anything but ordinary. The author knows exactly how he wants his characters to develop. Rather than starting slow, he straps you in and takes you on a rollercoaster ride that only goes higher. His grammar is a little off but he's able to get the point across. I can't wait to read the upcoming updates! Great work, Author-nim.

I won't judge or anything basing on the first two chapters with the grammatical errors because this is an ongoing and new novel. I believe the author will progress as much as other authors who were once newbies! I recommend this book to those who like a unique and special story, maybe also aggressive too hahaha. Good job Author! Keep writing and I will support you! Recommend this to other pips too! [img=recommend]

I really like the characters and plot, the book has potential, I recommend the author to make the paragraphs into small sentences as readers are often lazy to read long paragraphs

Okay, your story is good but need to improve on the grammar and the quality of the writing. Then, the character design is good, but I can't imagine what kind of world in this story, keep it up.

I loved this book, I am already huge fan of BL and here with mystery it's soo good. the plot is very interesting so are the characters. I did find small Grammer error but overall I loved this. good job author!😊