The Elderwood Guardian
In a world where magic is in abundance and heavily relied upon, elves find they are losing their place. Mages being born into an elvish family is rare enough to leave the race in decline, leaving them little choice to retreat back to their ancestral homes in the woods of the world.
Cyran Arthelius is a relatively young elf who grew up on his fathers stories as an adventurer and dreams of having adventures of his own one day. However, tragedy forces him upon his adventure far before he is ready and he will soon realise that there is more at stake than he first realises.
This is going to be the first novel I have ever written so I will do my utmost to make it as gripping a read as possible!
This will not be a fairy tale like story! There will be violence, deception, love and a character who goes through his own trials and battles his own demons.
Believe me if the author kept the same excellent verbal use of grammar, tone, world background and the real time characters then the story is going to be the super hit soon.
Aside from a few missing commas, I was enchanted by the writing style and immersed into this world, despite how cliche it might sound with elves and their magic. This is a polished, hidden gem ! The plot was equally well-written, giving off a hint of mystery yet not distracting me from what I was currently reading. A perfect balance if I do say so myself. XD Overall, a definite 5 stars from me ! So keep up the good work, Author !
This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!
Wow! 6 chapters in, and I have to say this! Your writing is really good! It was pleasing to read! I enjoyed how you've described the world. I enjoyed Cyran's journey to becoming the strongest. Hope you will continue to write such excellent works. Sincerely, CodeW
Good work so far! I'm enjoying it. Your details are great, grammar and punctuation etc. are good. Your characters are interesting, and you really paint a picture with your descriptions. Your prose flows nicely each chapter. Keep it up!
From what I read so far, the content is very detailed. The plot is very unique and the character development is impressive. Keep up the good work!!!!! [img=update] [img=recommend]
Read to chapter 4. I really enjoyed reading this story. It has a very catchy first few chapters. The characters are well written - the protagonists have life and humor in them, whilst upon meeting the first antagonists, I immediately wanted to murder them - a sign of good writing. The story is unfolding at a good pace, not too rushed or too slow. I really like how the author slowly builds the world by incorporating information through the story. He (I think its a he) didn't throw all of the information The only problem is a bit of the writing. There are some mistakes in the grammar and some unclear phrases, but in general, the writing mistakes did not interfere with my reading. Nice story, would recommend. I am waiting for more.
Start reading this if you're looking for a new male lead fantasy book to add to your collections!! There is little to no grammatical error. The author does a really good job with description and , the story line itself is really good. What more could you want?
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Huhu! Well done author kun. Really like this novel; from the grammar to the plot. Incredible work so far, but I'm waiting for more chapters. Release more!!!!!! I said release more!!!!!!!
I'm enjoying how the story is progressing. I can already see that the protagonist is a very strong individual, yet his share of realistic goals and fears. Keep up the good work. 👍
The story is well written and has interesting characters. The way you have described the world where the story takes place is amazing. I am really excited to see where your story goes.
Very well done, this story drags you in with its details starting in the first paragraph. I really like Cyran and from what I have read I don't think that is going to change. Overall very well done, good job.