Eris was cast out from her village because she isn't human. The people are disgusted by her appearance, being half human and half mermaid. Everyone except Cashimir.
Cashimir is the only one in the village who was kind to her and loved her. But Eris was afraid to believe that he actually loved her. And so their paths go diffrent ways, Cashimir being the chosen one of the goddess of purity while Eris goes on her quest to free all non-humans. Will she succeed?
Will their paths cross each other once again? Be able to love each other? Or will they fall into the darkness and become each other's enemies?
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Unexpectedly great read So far, the grammatical errors have been kept to a minimum, while the character design and the portrayal of their emotions and feeling have been executed to near perfection. Recommend this novel to others
An interesting and a quick start to the story. By giving us a quick introduction to the main characters and the village where they came from he already got the plot moving. I hope the author can continue to write this way.
Wow. This is something I don't get a chance to say often, but I was thoroughly impressed with how well the story is written. The details are so on point that you can feel the mood in your heart and you can feel the character's emotions. This story is, I dare say, flawless! I couldn't find a single mistake. The plot and storyline flows so well, effortlessly like a river. I find myself falling in love with this story and the characters. I wish I could give this story more than 5 stars. This is a fantastic story to read!
Very Intriguing Story. The story arc is written very well and the stability of the characters is steady. I am looking forward to reading more!
Characters are wonderfully portrayed, I especially love how natural the interactions between the MC and ML are. The story progression is great and the mystery makes you want to know more. There are a few grammatical errors but overall the writing style is better than most books. Definitely recommended.
The writing is pretty good here. It's a good character that many will relate to, being hurt by others. There are some grammar errors, but nothing that stops you understanding what is being said. A great book for fantasy readers who like to feel like the character feels what they feel.
A brief yet concise synopsis with some errors here and there - It's not too bad really, but the synopsis is definitely not reflective of the author's actual writing ability. The first chapter starts with a pinch but ends with a heart gripping feeling because of the the insecure yet precious relationship between Cashimir and Eris. Fleshed out characters with flaws and fitting dialogues, the dynamic between these two are very consistent and enjoyable at times. I think that content should be divided into more paragraphs? Big chunky paragraphs of words are not very appealing, however, it is still quite neat in its own way! I think certain places can definitely use help from an editor but it is way more readable than many other books. The names are unique but easy to remember, very fitting in a world of magic. I think the pacing is quite alright, though (spoiler alert) Cashimir's leaving could have been foreshadowed in a few different ways. Overall, I think you did a great job! Romance isn't easy to write and you have created a very individual bond that speaks of your ability to manifest emotion through words.
I like the relationship between Eris and the love interest, looking for more :) so many mysteries, I need answers.....who is the butterfly woman a fairy maybe ?