The Alien's Retaliation
The novel takes place in an alternate universe that is brimming with life. There are a lot of planets were life has greatly developed, as many civilizations were born.
Fearsome aliens and strange creatures inhabit the space, and at the same time wars and conflicts are not such a rare sight.
On a remote planet, ignorant of everything, Xeno is living a hard and monotonous life, waiting for time to make its course. However once again the mysteries of the universe will present before his eyes, changing his life completely.
If somehow you are still curious and are thinking about giving this book a chance, you should check out the review section. There you might find answered some of your questions.
The narration has been changed to third person from chapter 24. However there will still be POV changes every so often.
This is an original work and at the same time my first novel, as such constructive criticism is welcomed. English is not my first language too, feel free to point out any mistakes you may find.
WARNING: The novel will have elements of gore, violence and some pretty strong scenes.
Note: I have posted this novel on Royal Road too.
Average words per chapter --> 1400
Chapter release (?).
--> I do NOT own the cover of the novel, if the author wants me to change it he just needs to tell me to.
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Personal review from the author. It is rather subjective as it is my own novel, but I won't make things up regarding what I would feel from the prospective of a reader. First and foremost the writing quality. It's not that good but still readable. Ifind that overall the sentences make sense and their structure is fine. There are minor mistakes here and there, therefore i cannot give four stars and since the writing isn't spectacular neither five. Then the story developement. I think It's pretty intriguing, I quite like the fights too. But there are some parts that seems rather random and not planned beforehand. Personally I really like the MC. It may be because I'm the author, but I think he is quite cool. It's a bit shameless but it's my opinion. Thus i gave 5 starts on the character. The updating stability is pretty random, but new chapters will come sooner or later. Thus I gave three stars. About the world background, I personally like the variety of scenarios presented in the novel.
This was right above mine in the promote you novel section so I thought I would give it a try. I did enjoy it actually and am glad I clicked it. It can now rest on the shelves of the other saved novels I like to read. Thank you!
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