I'm interested in the story so far, I realy like the way you charactarizaed Cero one of the antagonists, I think he is Antogonist at least, I realy like the fragments of lore about Morigann, and this world that you're creating , I realy like the way that the story resolves for now, I realy liked the convesation in chapter 3, where Main heroine didn't apear, only two of the antagonist, that main character hates to her core, and would probaply do anything to kill them, I hope you will continue to do the great job doing this story, so far I very like this
not a bad start, i like the mc for now, it is first chapter so i won't write proper review yet, but i like story so far. it starts intersting
4 years ago
6
Albeda
I like the story so far, I realy like the way you presented the way mkc thinks,
and her inner monolouge., it was great start, i hope you will make a chapters a little longer but over all i think its a great start
4 years ago
3
Dao_of_Melancholy
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I'm interested in the story so far, I realy like the way you charactarizaed Cero one of the antagonists, I think he is Antogonist at least, I realy like the fragments of lore about Morigann, and this world that you're creating , I realy like the way that the story resolves for now, I realy liked the convesation in chapter 3, where Main heroine didn't apear, only two of the antagonist, that main character hates to her core, and would probaply do anything to kill them, I hope you will continue to do the great job doing this story, so far I very like this
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not a bad start, i like the mc for now, it is first chapter so i won't write proper review yet, but i like story so far. it starts intersting
I like the story so far, I realy like the way you presented the way mkc thinks, and her inner monolouge., it was great start, i hope you will make a chapters a little longer but over all i think its a great start
Yes yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes
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