Grimm Soul (Rwby)

Hey, let's go! Always good to see a RWBY story that strikes new territory. Now the struggle will be the MC getting his dick back. Writing is good, story is fun. Waiting for more!

Well, you know it, you love it. It's the tried and true moth of giving your own story a perfect rating wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooga, let's do it boys!

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Finally a rwby FF that seems original! Ans actually well writen as well ! chapter are a bit on the short side but that means they come quicker (no dick pun intended) it's a bit risky and daring to do a rwby FF that starts at the fall of beacon but at least we are spared the same S1,2,3, shenanigans that we saw so many times we can nearly recite them ourselves! It gives a lot of change from usual with a intersting character being one of the coolest grimm around. Also author you and your MC must be after my own heart doing a rwby harem story and have a MC that goes for our favorite australian rabbit girl... And with Neo in cover while cuping a feel on Emerald you only need to tear the BellaBooty away from the claws of that useless SSJ rip-off and forced sexuality change to please the community to make me a happy new fan! More seriously you really seem like a man of culture if your first chapter and book image are foreshadowing in any way doing a working and risked but intersting RWBY harem story with Velvet and Neo (and Blake man of culture ya'know) as first galz i'm already liking you! A counsel just don't make a harem too gigantic don't need 20 girls to make it work just some good Velvet cake, Neo-cream, Bellabooty, Sustrai with maybe some Yang or some Rubes, and a fill of Malachite, Sienha or Aslan to spice it up and we are already perfect! dunno if you are saving pyrrha at that point but IMO if ya do keep arkos going it doesn't make much sense if spartagirl fall for a lion just cuz it used cinder as a scratchpost Friendily from another man of culture (the good one!) ps: don't forget in flying battles if the enemy is behind.... DO A BARRELROLL!!

I would like to sincerely beg you to continue this fic, please.

Wooooooooooooo me encanta :v reseña en español carnal está muy wena la historia y desde un punto de vista interesante. Esa actitud tan orgullosa y honesta junto con la pisca de hormonas de adolecente le da al MC la cualidad que buscamos algunos lectores , sigue así carnal y te llevaras todas mis piedras.

Great stuff I love it!

5 star in the books for the cover art! This website needs more rwby fanfic!!!! $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

good story one of few dood ones about rwby and grim MC. don't drop cause it's awsome and we will be sad about it........................................ ok?

a great story just hope i comes back soon....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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My only problem is author seems to dropped this. This was such a good story. I love this authors novels. I Hope he update storyi the near future altough its been a year since the last chapter. Maybe he is sharing it on another platform?

Man oh, man, have I been glad to read this. Lately I've been on a RWBY fanfic binge, and I'm proud to say that this is one of the ones I've enjoyed the most. The 2nd person POV threw me at first, but once you're over it it's not a problem. In a way it's what I imagine a GM reading out a campaign in D&D would be like (don't quote me here I've never played...). Starting at the fall of Beacon. Well, you've got balls to begin the story there, but I like it. Starting this far in the fic has the disadvantage of cutting out the introductions and development of the other characters (the main cast of RWBY). Unless you've already watched RWBY or binged enough fanfics on it, then it can be harder to understand and get the feel for what the original cast is like (however considering this is a fanfic, and I'm guessing most of the target audience already knows enough about the cast, this isn't too much of a problem). I love that the MC is a Grimm, I've found it hard to find any fics with a Grimm MC/OC/SI so finding it here is awesome. (Hey, if you know any other Grimm MC fics, please tell me ~<3 Grimm) I do feel that the MC's nature as a Grimm could be better explored. Aside from getting a stronger body, the ability to sense emotion and a direct line to Salem, it's not really explored if it affects his nature at all. Personally I would expect some greater urges or drives because of this, (unless I missed it) but this isn't shown from what I can see. An upfront pervy bastard. Awesome, I get the impression of a younger, cooler and smoother Jiraiya, which is always a win in my books. On the Ecchi action... Keep up the good work. Although I feel that the willingness of characters to perform 'Ecchi-like' is more pronounced compared to how these characters act in other fics, I approve. Ecchi fics may not be my bread-and-butter, but I like dipping into them from time to time and I can say that so far, you've done a good job. On a side note ~ crossing my fingers and hoping that his human form (when he gets it) look like Grimmjow from Bleach. Just... Cause... CAUSE HE LOOKS AWESOME! Grimmjow is best boy! and look >.> here! 'Grimm'jow. He's got Grimm in his NAME! Anyway... Good job, I hope you keep it up. Loving it so far (I'm at c45 rn) and Nora/Neo BEST GIRLS. Although Ruby and Pyrrha are pretty cute too ~O.O~ Best Wishes -This Random Fanfic Addict (Not my actual username on any media)

you need to update h h h b