If the heavens do exist, then I'll make them my servants.
If they are the law makers, I'll will turn them upside down.
I'm am me, and If there is destiny, I'll make l become it's destination.
If there is creation, then I'll become the creator.
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This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With such unique take of the genre, this will fare well in the future! The author is talented and skilled with his craft! Kudos and Good luck! from Review swap.....
Quite an intriguing story we have here. Review after reading upto chapter 19 Writing Quality: The narratives were expressed well. There are very few g-errors but not too much to hinder you from your reading. Story Development. The development of the story is flowing with great fluidity. And as you proceeds from chapter to chapter, it keeps you from reading more. Character Design. I must say that I enjoy the attitude of the main character. He is a troublemaker but a confident one. A confident troublemaker xd. The other characters don't feel bland or carbon copy from each other and had their own unique personas. Updating Stability. It seems the updates are stable so far. World Background: I think the world background is pretty well made with enough descriptives that makes you captivated. There is also no scenes that feels like info dumps as everything flow naturally. Overall if you're looking to a interesting read with vampires and supernaturals, then you can definitely give this a try and I tell you that you won't be disappointed reading this. keep up the great work, author!
Intriguing loving the story line and would definitely recommend it, just make sure you have enough time this book is addictive, the storyline is captivating i would highly recommend this book, as its a masterpiece. Thanks author
Okay so, WOW. I like where this book is going honestly. The author knows how to make his or her readers intrigued by everything that's going on. The details are immaculate too. Well done! [img=recommend]
Fast paced and intriguing, the synopsis pulled me right in and I have no regrets. Looking forward to more of your chapters~!!!
Reading the first chapter, its so awesome! Action-packed and quite intriguing though there are little grammar mistakes. Looking forward for the next ones!
The premise of the story is good. An MC that is different from the rest, who is treated differently compared to others is sure to get the readers excited as it did me. It was an amazing experience. One area that seemed lacking was the usage of correct grammar and sentences. Otherwise, the story is gold with a smooth flowing story!
The story is well written, just a few grammatical errors, but it's impressive. The author did a job bringing the characters to live. The plot is well constructed, the character outline is well defined. Great job author
A really impressive story. The pacing is done well and the characters also are designed well. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but they do not harm the reading experience.
Nicely done. Really engaging Chapters and beautifully written paragraphs. A few grammatical mistakes in between but that much is acceptable. Really love it. Keep writing ❤️ ❤️ .
The book itself is actually really nice. The character development or build is to the tee I love it. Update stability and world design are also top notch. The problem I have with the book is the grammatical construct. I forgot that English doesn't seem to be your first language or even if it is, people are not above mistakes. So what you can do right now is just to get an editor or a proofread editor to help me to check everything then adjust it.
Awesome, the story is very unique and different. Vampire, magic, I really like it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] good work, Author
The storyline is quite unique, the character design is amazing at least in my opinion. The story definitely has lots of potential. I hope to see this story continue!
Awesome!
I am kinda bored today, so I guess I can leave a review while I read the last chapter.... Good stuff👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP