I enjoyed how brief this synopsis is. Its such a great plot, the writer has made an amazing story. I totally enjoyed the very first few chapters of it. Big up.
4 years ago
3
MisanAkuya
There is a lot of fantasy out there that it is easy to get turned off. That is because a lot of it isnt good. But when done good, fantasy can be engaging. This is fantasy done good.
4 years ago
2
_Ana_16_
The description is extremely interesting and simple and that is what draws you in, nice, but you can work on being more descriptive like in the prologue it would have been more nice if it was a bit lengthy and more descriptive, but all in all a very interesting concept and a well written story line 💕🥰 would love to read more and more
4 years ago
2
ShoRin
in case no one notice my comment, I'll let you know here.
I am the author and sorry if the update was slow. I got into a school with a dorm system and we cant bring our electronics. but when I get home, I will write back everything I've written in school and make sure you guys had a lot of updates! stay tuned and don't be shy to drop criticism and point out my mistake because I am still new and I would love to hear people's opinion.
4 years ago
2
DaoistooBsz4
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😁😁😁😁🤗🤗🤗lovely. Absolutely and definitely worth the read😄😄😄😄🔥🔥🔥🥳🥳🥳😎. The characters, writing, all, too perfection.🤗I look forward to more from you. 🤗lots of love.
3 years ago
1
benten_
noicee but i was wondering when will author did a new update because I am excited to know what happened! i understand the author is busy so take your time!
3 years ago
1
Binggo_chan
Understandable for the slow update because author is busy but keep it up! i could see the author is trying to write better and saw the change in writing! good luck author! I hope i can understand more about the characters! 💕
3 years ago
1
EnnaGenna
This one is an amazing sample of the fantasy. I attached is too much...It is very good... Thanks to the author for sharing such a good one...
3 years ago
1
L1v
I really liked the synopsis of the book. In few lines it caught my attention which is great for me because I decide to read the book after reading the synopsis. The plot of the book is good as well. Good job!
3 years ago
1
KaGen
An unusual type of story. I smiled while reading often. Especially "let's be together 35 days" stuff :) Updating frequency is not high so I broke a point on there. It is good on the recent categories. Thanks and congratulations to the author.
3 years ago
1
nia_94
Reveal Spoiler
3 years ago
1
Leon_Kingraph
This story is unique. The idea is pretty interesting. And the story development is not slow or fast. It is readable and intriguing. With every chapter, things are getting more intriguing.
3 years ago
1
foxyash
I enjoyed the book! the book has different plot from what I have read here...I read the first few chapters n I love the plot of the book...the writer has done a great job!
4 years ago
1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Just by reading the book and the first chapters, I knew I'll get addicted! never blink once, there are unexpected things that can happen in an instant. good job author, such an exciting read!
4 years ago
1
Lancee
The story has great potential, the authors writing style sure is creative and the flow is so natural through each read. And ofcoz there are few spelling errors but that's something that can be fixed. Overall this was a good read.
I enjoyed how brief this synopsis is. Its such a great plot, the writer has made an amazing story. I totally enjoyed the very first few chapters of it. Big up.
There is a lot of fantasy out there that it is easy to get turned off. That is because a lot of it isnt good. But when done good, fantasy can be engaging. This is fantasy done good.
The description is extremely interesting and simple and that is what draws you in, nice, but you can work on being more descriptive like in the prologue it would have been more nice if it was a bit lengthy and more descriptive, but all in all a very interesting concept and a well written story line 💕🥰 would love to read more and more
in case no one notice my comment, I'll let you know here. I am the author and sorry if the update was slow. I got into a school with a dorm system and we cant bring our electronics. but when I get home, I will write back everything I've written in school and make sure you guys had a lot of updates! stay tuned and don't be shy to drop criticism and point out my mistake because I am still new and I would love to hear people's opinion.
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😁😁😁😁🤗🤗🤗lovely. Absolutely and definitely worth the read😄😄😄😄🔥🔥🔥🥳🥳🥳😎. The characters, writing, all, too perfection.🤗I look forward to more from you. 🤗lots of love.
noicee but i was wondering when will author did a new update because I am excited to know what happened! i understand the author is busy so take your time!
Understandable for the slow update because author is busy but keep it up! i could see the author is trying to write better and saw the change in writing! good luck author! I hope i can understand more about the characters! 💕
This one is an amazing sample of the fantasy. I attached is too much...It is very good... Thanks to the author for sharing such a good one...
I really liked the synopsis of the book. In few lines it caught my attention which is great for me because I decide to read the book after reading the synopsis. The plot of the book is good as well. Good job!
An unusual type of story. I smiled while reading often. Especially "let's be together 35 days" stuff :) Updating frequency is not high so I broke a point on there. It is good on the recent categories. Thanks and congratulations to the author.
Reveal Spoiler
This story is unique. The idea is pretty interesting. And the story development is not slow or fast. It is readable and intriguing. With every chapter, things are getting more intriguing.
I enjoyed the book! the book has different plot from what I have read here...I read the first few chapters n I love the plot of the book...the writer has done a great job!
Just by reading the book and the first chapters, I knew I'll get addicted! never blink once, there are unexpected things that can happen in an instant. good job author, such an exciting read!
The story has great potential, the authors writing style sure is creative and the flow is so natural through each read. And ofcoz there are few spelling errors but that's something that can be fixed. Overall this was a good read.