holy spirit journey (Eng)

A very good fanfic! the plot is interesting, the characters are very alive and don't look like puppets, the world and the background story are great and the romance is already bearing fruit. as a whole the story is very good. the author did a great job.

4.8 stars due to the change between 'he' and 'she' otherwise everything is fine. And I hope Zi Ji is in his harem. Sorry for the bad English.

1. It's great. 2. Love interest choice is great. 3. Plot is amazing. 4. It's way before cannon, which is rarely done. And I just love it.

Bruh there are few problems here.. 1. I don't give a **** about grammar as long as context is understandable but make the GENDER IDENTITY clear please. He /She Her/His is confusing. 2. Update Stability is random. At least give us time in your GMT so we can wait. Good work keep going bro. I'm betting all my powerstones so I hope this novel goes untill 250~300 chaps

Story going ok.. Charcters are good.. Background development is also good.. MC doesn't seem like horny mut so yeah that's a plus.. But add some NSWF bruh.. and also make sure don't portray everything is easy for MC because this is first world. Because here every author makes shit because just you are born in first world you don't need it be easy... And stop slow life and start the plot.. That's it.

It's a good fanfic, the MC is interesting and even with the monotonous things the story is interesting. My concern is that the MC will probably become a god before chapter 50 and I don't know what the hell is left for the author to write when that happens. Now that the MC is going to be nerfed, I sincerely hope that the progression will be much slower and the journeys will begin for the multiverses. There is no point in doing this when the MC can blow up planets as it will be boring and a fanfic like that doesn't last long in the ranking.

I really like it but i only have one question will this story dropped ??? If yes pls answer bc i don‘t want to read a good story and be sad bc it‘s been dropped

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Interesting story so far. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍