Naruto the Spartan of UNSC
Author: cielfathan
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After the battle of the dead valley and retrieving Sasuke, Naruto has been banished by the council and the elder by the vote now without his friend betrayed him except Hinata because his love him Naruto goes to wave country and get the boat from Tazuna to go to unknown island there they come with unimaginable he sees
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overall this story is really good not great but definitely not bad the only thing I would suggest is that you hit enter when you have some one talk/think to make it easyer for people to know when they are talking/thinking furthermore I think you should differentiate between talking and thinking like "talking" 'thinking' *sound effects*
the sentence formation is BS...... I didn't understand even the first chapter....... you seriously need a proofreader or you can just put it in grammarly
The writing started out okayish the first two chapters and it all went down hill from there. From the third chapter on, it felt like I was reading machine translated work.