The Hentai Protagonist System [New Version]
I was just going a long with life.
I simple worked as a waiter in a high class restaurant, went back home and that was it. I had no friends, never had a girlfriend and basically had no social life. My only pastimes were anime, manga and such, but there was one thing that I liked the most.
Hentai.
I couldn't count how many times I spend most of my free time simple watching hentais and masturbating. Sometimes I varied and jack off to erotic games and hentai manga as well.
Sundelly I found myself in complely unkown space, in the presence of two being saying they were gods and they are offering an opportunity to live my sexual fantasies?
What the hell is going on?
Current schedule: 5 chapters/week
Obs. 1: Despite being the second version of the story, it still is a work used for me to develop my writing skills. Read at least the fifteenth chapter before forming an opinion.
Obs. 2: The protagonist won't start a a sexual master, so don't expect him to be always dominant on the beginning. He will grow over time, so be patient with me.
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I wont waste my time writing a coherent review, in short the MC is a beta c*ckold similar to the author. ---- Reviews are being deleted too as there's no way this has 4 stars.
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Ummm im kinda confused what was wrong with the other one?? I thought it was perfectly fine and going in a good direction
I liked your story but am going have to drop the mc complains about himself way too much and it annoys my soul so much. I stoped at chapter 48
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I have a good time reading it. It have a unique writing as I am also writing a FF. By the way I have to ask this as I am curious 😅. What's the sauce or Name of the Girl in the Cover Photo. It's for research purposes 😅.
Liked the start of the story a bit, but after the system changed and the chapter with the gods I really started disliking this story. The system change I thought was lazy writing. And the chapter with the gods was actually useless, it was super vague and nothing was explained about their intentions or what the point of the system was. The lemons aren’t great, I don’t think the Mc is written well, he doesn’t do much. I don’t think this story has much going for it
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why is MC despite having his memories stutters in front of his new family and act like a lost poppy in front his father? it's so irritating that I want to bash someone's head
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nice,keep going. just kill old man bastar and steal gilr i too want shiboraretai with oneeee-sannnn[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I wait!!! Come back and write moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I love the story and I hope the author keeps up the good work. The only problem is the update speed, I wish it was faster.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁