This is a very good starts, pls don't abandon it like other people adnadon their webnovels after 3 chaps. it can be considered very good. I also like the idea to make him have multiple powers without having problems with telling them thanks to AFO. Continue like this, if u are able to also keep regular updates it will be even better.
4 years ago
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Hades_1
it seems a little fast paced and rushed in general but it's a good start and I'm hoping it's only because it's new! I'd also be interested in a short chapter just to tell everyone in depth what all his powers are but I don't think it's really needed
This is a very good starts, pls don't abandon it like other people adnadon their webnovels after 3 chaps. it can be considered very good. I also like the idea to make him have multiple powers without having problems with telling them thanks to AFO. Continue like this, if u are able to also keep regular updates it will be even better.
it seems a little fast paced and rushed in general but it's a good start and I'm hoping it's only because it's new! I'd also be interested in a short chapter just to tell everyone in depth what all his powers are but I don't think it's really needed
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