The Between

Just amazing start. I loved it .the background story in the streets of London . it's a great read. I am already hooked. It's Very different than most of the books I have read. I do recommend it to all. Keep the good work up Author .

I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything. I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging. Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment. The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything. I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging. Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment. The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything. I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging. Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment. The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? because I barely see any detail containing any one of the tags, and more information would be nice. Also, I haven't really seen the sci fi aspects stand out. In short, the writing itself is good, but I believe the world building and story direction can be better.

FIrst of all, I love your book cover, especially when you mentioned that you made it! Second, your introductory for the book is superb! Although I am not a fan of informal writing (or dialogues), it was enough to captivate and engage me in the story~ Will definitely read this through~ Kudos for the author!!! [img=recommend]

Wow! It's an interesting and amazing story with a captivating plot! I like the way you described the scenarios! Like it a lot! Hope to see more of the good work!

Writing is excellent, background and update stability--it's all pretty good. Dialogue is top tier, the narration is great, OP knows what he's doing. OP is good at building things up, world tensity, chemistry. Cool stuff.