Dropped because I'm too lazy
Author: CountlessDreams
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Dropped because I'm too lazy to actually trying to do something interesting after fucking up the story :(
If you think the idea was cool or something similar, feel free to use it in any way you wish, I ain't bother with this thing anymore, my head simply can't take on the pressure, maybe I'll try writing this thing some other time with another plot, different mc or idk, something else, good luck.
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A samurai from a samurai clan that was pary of land of iron, now last of his blood line is somehow in konoha training to be a ninja. it’s bad, he could become a ronin and wander the land end train. Don’t just force choke him into the plot like that, atleast make him go around have him think about his end plan his goal in his new life
A really good start, but my expectations were too high, it looked like this would be an original story about samurais on Naruto but it ended up like any other Konoha's fanfic where he'll have to fight against Danzo and Orochimaru's manipulations and fight a war that has nothing to do with him, bucause, you know, SHINOBI war, worse thing he only watched Naruto and not Shippuden, so most of his knowledge is as good as useless, may as well make him an OC. Grammar is good, same for update stability.
What you got so far is pretty good and I can see something I will find very funny. Because early on it mentions the difference between samurai and ninja. and if you read naruto near the end it doesn't matter if you can sneak or not because everyone is so strong sneaking doesn't matter.