In Naruto with Slightly Perverted System

Author's shameless review here. This fanfiction is my first story so feel free to correct my mistakes so I can make this fanfiction better. Thank you.

longer chapters and less time skips would be good but overall is going well because of the "PLOT" ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°).   ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)  ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee you should be more explicit in R18 scenes can't wait till mc bangs kushina senseless and do mikoto too

Im going to be honest. Looking for a deep and interesting plot? not for you. Looking for some intense character development? not for you. This is just a fun read with some comedy, s*x, and an easy to understand plot. Enjoy as a casual read.

Extremely boring fan fiction. The characters are banal NPCs. The dialogues between the characters are stupid and monotonous, I constantly see praise for the main character there. The author, it seems, has never met a girl, relationships are not built like that, well, no, at 6-10 years old to arrange a "sexy" massage, from what do girls end up? What kind of nonsense is this? Why are there so many spam reviews without any normal criticism? Although what do I expect from working in webnovel, especially with the tag "harem".

BEST NARUTO FF, all things are included 1) op mc 2) no ntr or drama 3)lemons 4)all best girls 5)comedy top notch 6)nice mc, not those emo or antihero types or cold and indifferent or the one who just have one night stands. 7)author interacts regularly. I am rereading it from ch1 hehe~ hope that you will keep posting and would not stop. LOVE YOUR FF

this ff is awesome lol,the writing, the Character design and World background, overall 5.0 but can you make the Chap long? just suggestion 😃 and the picture of this ff is trash lol just change it please to catch readers attention ☺️

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Honest review after reading this, The thing is mc becomes trap and gets f****d by naruto,sasuke,itachi,madara,orichumaru this book is only for M's and traps . . . . . . .

The grammar has small errors apart from that the story is interesting so what I've been reading the story is going to make it entertaining ..........

Imma give you my honest review. The plot has potential no doubt as it is somewhat unique And could be better if you can flesh out the character more. Writing fanfic is not easy and I appreciate your effort. People would complain amd sometimes it can be discouraging but if you are serious about writing then let the review be inspiration for writing journey. I wont tell you it is good as it can give you false impression and can create a bottleneck for your own thinking and story writing creativity. But even though it is not upto the standard, it is still enjoyable and hope you continue to write and also improve your quality as I have lot of hope in your fanfiction.

Too many plot holes and continuity errors. The author notes actually say things like "There are plot holes in this chapter, ignore them and just enjoy" and "I don't care about how this is supposed to happen, meh the important thing is protagonist can get more girls now". Also, there is blatant bias against Sakura in at least upto the chapters I have read, so skip this if you like Sakura.

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