The Legend of the Grim reaper
In the shadowy corridors of time, a tale unfolds - a tale of a man, once visible, now draped in the shroud of darkness. He was the Grim Reaper, a name whispered in both awe and fear.
His appetite for women knew no bounds, and his disregard for their worth marked him as a figure of arrogance. In the heart of Nafitath, a realm of benevolent gods, he carved a path of recklessness, fueled by his unchecked might. How this transformation occurred remains an enigma, a puzzle with pieces missing.
Amidst the celestial clash and the rise and fall of powers, a tapestry of intrigue and destiny awaits. Venture into the depths of this tale, where gods and mortals collide, and the legacy of Grim Reaper unfolds, revealing the secrets that lie beneath the shadows.
I am loving every bit of the story. I feel like I am a part of each scene. Thank you for putting this here, Uwem King. You are doing well. Please keep it up
Work on your synopsis a bit, as well as the flow of your dialogue and you should be good to go 3.8/5 so far, story seems legit word count
Inspiring, quantitative, and realistic. Interesting story from a brilliant imagination. The story confirms that simplicity is the greatest form of sophistication.
It is important to note that some people are gifted! You are, and I do hope you find a manager to put you on that sharpening edge! Your story is spectacular. I think it's doing well only that you need to challenge yourself more!
I actually got interested when I saw the title. I got into chapter one and I said next. I got to the next until your last posted chapter. Now I can't wait for the rest of the chapters. I love your imagination and plot. Keep writing and keep improving.
It is wonderful to have a Hollywood feeling from your piece. I am happy I am following up. The way the suspense gears up at every level is amazing. I think you need a mentor who will brush you up more and help you discover quite a lot about yourself. Keep the good job up!
It is awesome, but you need to work on your synopsis and you will be fine. I really enjoy the simplicity and suspense. This is really going to make a great movie! well done
This has been an amazing story so far. I particularly love the character formation and the setting of the story, a blend of the new and the old. This is a masterclass work of fiction that seems so real. At first, one would think this is an event that has taken place in history, and only an intuitive mind can put all that together. Keep it coming, it's definitely worth the read.
I never really like paranormal but reading yours is really refreshing. I guess I will have to give paranormal writers a chance in my library. Yes, I agree you work on the synopsis. It needs to be as catchy as the story itself. Best of luck!
Work on yourself every day, your word counts should upgrade. I love the story, only that I wish each chapter were more than 2000k words. Your imagination is simply rare. Keep it up!
I love the story development, your character design. I don't know how to write but I love to read. To read your books! You need a manager, and I hope you find one cause you are a genius writer! I like!