Author here, this fan fiction is about KnB but there will be harem(be warned) and some other anime characters will be included.
How often I will update will depend on my mood. So just enjoy the fic.
4 years ago
44
kickyx
Really good story and i really liked it at the beginning but after having to wait for new chapters the story started dying down for me and it felt more like a chore to read it for me personally. The main reason is because how forced it all seems in the latest chapters. For example, he joined the team that both nash and silver were in and at the same time Alexandra was also coaching(this by itself is impossible because alexandra stated she never coached anyone but kagami and the other dude). This just seemed too unrnealistic of a coincidence to me. Also, kobe was somehow at a middle school practice game because the dean invited him.. Yeah right, a dean would invite a NBA player to their school to show them their basketball teams first ever match for no reason but to show them.. doesnt make sense. What makes even less sense is how Kobe stayed afterwards to give tips to the MC... A celebrity like Kobe would literally not have the time to stay afterwards just to watch a kid practice playing basketball..
But it was a pretty good story, just not for me. Keep it up author
4 years ago
8
Miu_chan_7272
I love the story!!Keep up the good work author-san!!!😎😘😊😂😎😘😊😂😎😘😊😂🙏💕🙏💕😎😘😊😂💕🙏💕💕😎😘😊😂😌🙏😎😘😊😂💕😌🙏😌🙏😌🙏🙏💕😎😘😊😂💕🙏💕🙏💕😎😘😊😂😌🙏😎😘😊😂💕💕
4 years ago
7
Fadly22
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4 years ago
7
EnderPL
I personally really like the story and theres nothing I could say is wrong.
The writing is great and consistent, the chapters are clearly proffread and edited.
The story progresses is fresh and not often seen is KnB stories.
From me it deserves 5*.
Only could be updated more as I really can’t wait for more chapters !
4 years ago
3
12HCL
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4 years ago
3
kobeblackmamba
Good story, different kind than other fanfic out there, not copy from another fanfic out there, good author cause often mass release. I don't mind with grammar cause not everone in the world use english as their 1st languageGood story, different kind than other fanfic out there, not copy from another fanfic out there, good author cause often mass release. I don't mind with grammar cause not everone in the world use english as their 1st language
4 years ago
2
Gabriel_Augusto_2205
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4 years ago
2
Kw0z
Absolute garbage. I understand that most novels aren’t realistic, but at least give the readers a reason as to why he instantly only loves his mother in a familial way.
It’s impossible to get through the first chapter just because he instantly loves his mother not as a woman, but just as his mother. Compeltely unrealistic.
2 years ago
1
Truth_Only_Reader
The main character is a genius... what can I say. The development of the story is good, with factors including how he realizes how weak he is compared to the NBA. Then we have his development as a character in which he tries to make his little brother live a bit easier. Character design is good. Plus with how updates are going I am enjoying the story a lot. Good story and good characters.
3 years ago
1
Cabul_Sekte
Aku benar - benar menyarankan ini dengan paksaan!, Maksudku WOW ini sangat bagus.
Jika anda tidak bisa berbahasa eng maka gunakan translate, mereka tidak terlalu jauh berbeda.
Author here, this fan fiction is about KnB but there will be harem(be warned) and some other anime characters will be included. How often I will update will depend on my mood. So just enjoy the fic.
Really good story and i really liked it at the beginning but after having to wait for new chapters the story started dying down for me and it felt more like a chore to read it for me personally. The main reason is because how forced it all seems in the latest chapters. For example, he joined the team that both nash and silver were in and at the same time Alexandra was also coaching(this by itself is impossible because alexandra stated she never coached anyone but kagami and the other dude). This just seemed too unrnealistic of a coincidence to me. Also, kobe was somehow at a middle school practice game because the dean invited him.. Yeah right, a dean would invite a NBA player to their school to show them their basketball teams first ever match for no reason but to show them.. doesnt make sense. What makes even less sense is how Kobe stayed afterwards to give tips to the MC... A celebrity like Kobe would literally not have the time to stay afterwards just to watch a kid practice playing basketball.. But it was a pretty good story, just not for me. Keep it up author
I love the story!!Keep up the good work author-san!!!😎😘😊😂😎😘😊😂😎😘😊😂🙏💕🙏💕😎😘😊😂💕🙏💕💕😎😘😊😂😌🙏😎😘😊😂💕😌🙏😌🙏😌🙏🙏💕😎😘😊😂💕🙏💕🙏💕😎😘😊😂😌🙏😎😘😊😂💕💕
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I personally really like the story and theres nothing I could say is wrong. The writing is great and consistent, the chapters are clearly proffread and edited. The story progresses is fresh and not often seen is KnB stories. From me it deserves 5*. Only could be updated more as I really can’t wait for more chapters !
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Good story, different kind than other fanfic out there, not copy from another fanfic out there, good author cause often mass release. I don't mind with grammar cause not everone in the world use english as their 1st languageGood story, different kind than other fanfic out there, not copy from another fanfic out there, good author cause often mass release. I don't mind with grammar cause not everone in the world use english as their 1st language
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Absolute garbage. I understand that most novels aren’t realistic, but at least give the readers a reason as to why he instantly only loves his mother in a familial way. It’s impossible to get through the first chapter just because he instantly loves his mother not as a woman, but just as his mother. Compeltely unrealistic.
The main character is a genius... what can I say. The development of the story is good, with factors including how he realizes how weak he is compared to the NBA. Then we have his development as a character in which he tries to make his little brother live a bit easier. Character design is good. Plus with how updates are going I am enjoying the story a lot. Good story and good characters.
Aku benar - benar menyarankan ini dengan paksaan!, Maksudku WOW ini sangat bagus. Jika anda tidak bisa berbahasa eng maka gunakan translate, mereka tidak terlalu jauh berbeda.
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