When she thought everything was over , she did not realise it was the moment to cry endless. Thus her expectations were simple they became very far for to reach therefore encountering as hard challenges as ever.
It's going to be a good story. Just author have to put her hard work in it and it can be a masterpiece! I will suggest you to update your synopsis as there was no story. And you should write *I* with capital letters and make your chapters big. You should at least write 14 or 15k words per chapters.
Anyways, maybe I wrote very much but I hope this will helpful to you and make a great story! Keep updating! I cheer you!
It's going to be a good story. Just author have to put her hard work in it and it can be a masterpiece! I will suggest you to update your synopsis as there was no story. And you should write *I* with capital letters and make your chapters big. You should at least write 14 or 15k words per chapters. Anyways, maybe I wrote very much but I hope this will helpful to you and make a great story! Keep updating! I cheer you!