This book has a lot of potentials. Just read all the published chapters and I need more... Keep updating! Would support you[img=coins][img=recommend]
3 years ago
3
Lancee
Beautiful story, I've just finished reading the two chapters and i must say great use of words that flow so well together. And i like how you introduced us to this world you've created, giving us pieces of the main character in a well written manner. A great read all the best Author.
3 years ago
1
Hand_Number_37
the concept is quite unique, and the first pov was a refreshing touch. The characters are vocal enough to make the story more engaging. looking forward to further developments.
3 years ago
1
kidd17
I like the way you describe the character here, it's kind of future mix with fantasy? I like they way you describing the background, fit well perfectly. And I wanted to see what happened next!
3 years ago
1
et_cetera
The plot is intriguing! The flow is also good. I hope to see more! I'll definitely follow the white haired guy![img=recommend]
3 years ago
1
Sumayya_Riaz
Good work! keep it up! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I appreciate your web novel. Keep on hard work. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
3 years ago
1
Lonely_Author
First of how dare you only have so few chapters...Secondly the way you word things is awesome really detailed. A clear picture in my mind. Looking forward to more and by more i mean hundreds and thousands of more chapters don't let me down or else!
3 years ago
1
Tekatokikata
The book is very well written, thou, granted errors will always be present, whether your an amateur author or a pro. But the errors I have seen through the first four chapters are not enough for me to deduct a point. So, here is a five star for the amazing book this is. Keep up the good work, now, since I'm done I will go back to finish it!
3 years ago
0
WordsmithVenerable
Interesting. A first person point of view. Quite a refreshing read and the flow is nice. I enjoyed reading it however there are only few chapters. Keep updating please lol
3 years ago
0
Thunder_Unicorn
This plot is really good. This novel should get more attention. All episodes gets more and more better. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
This book has a lot of potentials. Just read all the published chapters and I need more... Keep updating! Would support you[img=coins][img=recommend]
Beautiful story, I've just finished reading the two chapters and i must say great use of words that flow so well together. And i like how you introduced us to this world you've created, giving us pieces of the main character in a well written manner. A great read all the best Author.
the concept is quite unique, and the first pov was a refreshing touch. The characters are vocal enough to make the story more engaging. looking forward to further developments.
I like the way you describe the character here, it's kind of future mix with fantasy? I like they way you describing the background, fit well perfectly. And I wanted to see what happened next!
The plot is intriguing! The flow is also good. I hope to see more! I'll definitely follow the white haired guy![img=recommend]
Good work! keep it up! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 I appreciate your web novel. Keep on hard work. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
First of how dare you only have so few chapters...Secondly the way you word things is awesome really detailed. A clear picture in my mind. Looking forward to more and by more i mean hundreds and thousands of more chapters don't let me down or else!
The book is very well written, thou, granted errors will always be present, whether your an amateur author or a pro. But the errors I have seen through the first four chapters are not enough for me to deduct a point. So, here is a five star for the amazing book this is. Keep up the good work, now, since I'm done I will go back to finish it!
Interesting. A first person point of view. Quite a refreshing read and the flow is nice. I enjoyed reading it however there are only few chapters. Keep updating please lol
This plot is really good. This novel should get more attention. All episodes gets more and more better. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.