Lucky draw Starting from Fairy tail

Writing quality leaves a lot to be desired to the point that rereading the paragraphs to decipher what is being implied is a necessity (A rewrite is most likely needed or an insane amount of editing to fix it) Punctuation is surprisingly good in spite of all the extraneous words I see comments from 3 years ago and there aren’t more than 30 chapters so the update speed is atrocious and I feel there is a significant chance it might go on hiatus again (gut feeling for this) Semi-Important things are just glossed/skipped over ex: struggles with reaching fruit and then about a day later can collect about 700 in 3 hours (ignoring the fact that so many trees containing fruit in one area is practically impossible unless in a farm because of bugs/birds and whatever else eat fruit and then rotting as well) Ex: materials and the know how to make a compass in the wild with no tools

author is literally illiterate, heavy editing required to understand anything.

a quick question is this Harem? (I honestly quite like Harem and single Heroine, tho Harem still up there).

Hey Author, don't worry too much about the negative reviews. While it's true that the grammar and sentence structure could use a bit of polish, the story itself is genuinely interesting. I can see the effort and thought you're putting into it. Maybe try using a tool like ChatGPT to help with proofreading, it could make a big difference. Thank you for your work, and please keep going!

writing quality is decent, the power is actually well though out with the limitations and so on. can see it going for a long while without turning boring. characters so far are good not too bad ans not to good. only hangup is the update stability.

You can summarize this story with three letters it’s… mid

Me gusto mucho lo que leí, a ido mejorando de a poco su escritura, la historia está muy interesante y me gustaría seguir leyendo más.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

bad... so bad...

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