The Reverse Mana System
"What curse is this! Even after transmigrating, I have to die at my nineteenth birthday for the second time."
Alex Vermillion, the fourth prince of the Flenreth empire is a transmigrator who died on his nineteenth birthday on Earth.
He is reincarnated in a world where magic power represents one status and standard of life.
But unfortunately, his body has zero tolerance to mana and lacks a magic core.
Despite this he is happy just to be alive, but all this changes on his second nineteenth birthday which is also the day when he was to be declared the crown prince. At midnight he is attacked by the elder brother of his body and nearly killed.
At the crucial moment the reverse Mana System which has been dormant in his body awakens.
This marks the start of his journey to the top in a world where humans, demons, beasts and minor gods fight for dominance, whereas the major gods and high demons who can't step in the world lurk behind the shadows to gain control of the world.
This is one of the best magic based webnovel I have read till now. Let's start with writing quality. The writing quality is good. There are a few spelling errors, but they are corrected after some time. The story is consistent and the stats, etc are all carefully calculated Story development. the story development is good and gets better as it progresses. After the first few chapters, the story developes naturally and consistently. Character design. there are only a few characters until now, but they are designed nicely and due to there only being few chapters, I'll have to wait till there are more for details the updating stability and world background are also praiseworthy If you are looking for a magic based webnovel with a new and good plot, I highly suggest you read this book for a few chapters before deciding.
So far the story is great! It's an interesting mixture of few genres. The plot is intriguing, your characters are expressive, and from the beginning, you tried to show the background world. Well done!
This is a very good book. The way you started the novel got me hooked. I loved the fact that there was no needless narration. I had to take my time to read this novel and it really proved its worth
Wow this book is so amazing and the writing style deserves a standing ovation . Am not really into system but this is a system worth reading. Author you are very talented, your first novel is a great one . I totally recommend it.
OOOOOH ! I LOVE it ! at first i don't like system very much, because the authors usually have a bad still description, or lack of good back story/background, BUT this novel is prefect! Writing quality, story development, character design and the back story. I was hocked since the first line "What curse is this! Even after transmigrating, I have to die at my nineteenth birthday for the second time." Highly recommendation keep going
Writing quality: Perfect, dialogues on point and the story is consistent, and the detailing is not much there in the story which is a plus point. Story development: The flow of the story is medium-paced and gets better as it progresses. Character design/ updating/ world background: the characters are well portrayed and can be visualized by them which reading it. Updating and world background is exquisite and praiseworthy. My thoughts: good read and best magic novel I've read so far...can't wait to read more and how the story progresses further...highly recommended!!! Keep up the good work, author!!!
Not gonna lie, I wasn't expecting much read the fire three chapters and I'm hooked. You might have found a new fan :) Also, I feel for the MC, lol.
I don't read much stories in this genre but this story pulled me in. I want to point out how clear the terminologies are explained and how well the world building is created. Definitely a great story!
Really amazing so far, this is one of the best magic based I've ever read. The way you write is incredible it intrigued me of what will come next in your story.
A good start, the writing quality is very consistent. Definitely quality content. The story has potential and can engross the readers. The abilities are well explained and the world background is good. The character design could do a little more work... all in all... who doesn't love an MC with a cheat. Keep up the good work.
Really interesting story so far. What sets this one apart from most other stories I have read is the terminology. There are a lot of unique abilities being used, and you can tell that the author used a lot of creativity when crafting this world.
This is a hidden gem the pacing and the writing itself are really good. i can definitely see me reading as muCh as i can in one setting. dont stop stay consistent so i can keep comIng back