“I’ll remind you one more time, If you die in here, you will die in real life, if someone pulls the plug to the headgear nothing will change to its internal battery if they try and turn off the headgear…”
“You will die,” John said, before the video cut off, making everyone scream, as they realized they truly couldn't log out of the game through the menu.
[ 3 Chapters's a week! ]
[ 1 Chapter = 1000+ words! ]
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[ I'm new to making Novels so PLEASE ignore my grammar mistakes and storytelling, I truly am just doing this to put my story out in the world, and if you like it please comment or message me on discord! ]
[ My discord is at the end of every chapter!
So pretty much every author does this so I decided to just join the bandwagon. PLEASE let me know your thoughts and opinions in the comments to reply to this comment t so it's a guarantee that I see your opinion, no matter how harsh or honest. I will not however allow racism, homophobia, any kind of slurs, and comments that could result in the danger of my own or someone else's mental health so please respect me and I will respect you. <3
The story is overall good and reminds me a lot about SAO(Sword Art Online). I cant wait to see how this story progresses, and would honestly give this a 4/5 (Keep up the good work)