The usual story of a person who didn't like Earth and is reborn into the world of dragon Ball with the Overhaul quirk. He decided to be the strongest in the world where strength matters.
I don't own anything except the MC and I wanted to write this because I thought that the overhaul quirk is too overpowered but, it wasn't shown much in MHA. The quirk in this story won't be op from the start. He is slowly going to improve his quirk.
When I read the second chapter I dropped it so fast I could barely see my fingers. If all you can write is trash romance why even write it at all.
Where can i find the prequel for this story because this definitely isn’t the first in the series. 2 chapters in and the Mc is already getting married to Bulma and apparently has a history with her going back to childhood.
for me this is 5 star.not the best fic.but it's better than most. now many will say that mc's power is nerfed. what they mean by that is his overhaul quirk need knowledge for him to create something from nothing. in a way it's a good nerf as if it isn't then that power is broken. anyway he uses his power to change his cells and dna so he will be powerfull. till now he stole dna from saiyan,starfish and high density muscular dinosour and some other space creatures. he is a heck lot strong than many others.so the story or author never nerfed the mc . just think his quirk is like tranfiguration from harrypotter.u need a good knowledge of what u want to create.thaats it.
There is no romance tag, but there is romance. That's some extra virgin oil. Mc also conveniently knew bulma in childhood. Also, I'm not exactly comfortable he's gonna 'shag' trunks' mom. Personal opinion ofc.
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
um it's alright so far but I just had to ask are we missing chaps at the start cuz it feels like we were just dropped in and our missing a lot of context with the way he keeps mentioning his childhood
I loved the story. Sure, it was never ended properly, but it has a summary at the end to bring some closure to it, and that was nice. Some may love this, others hate it, but even if it was a little rough around the edges with PLs, it was entertaining and clearly well-planned.
The inconsistency is strong in this one, im okay with nerf overhaul but he didn't wish for biology knowledge when he needs it but instead he wish for magical technique knowledge but don't know the simple transformation tffff it's worth time
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