HP: The Secret Heir.

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Top notch premise with a unique main character. Can’t say much more without spoiling the small surprise. But great fanfic 10/10 would recommend

The novel is very well written and didn't saw any incorect words or grammar, The story develop fast but in a good way. All I want to say is just read it and you won't regret.

It's not that the story is bad. The problem lies in the fact that there are no facts. The first 2 chapters are a whole lot of PLOT ARMOR. He needs money? Hey, there is someone running a dice game and he just happens to be carrying around 50K pounds for MC to win it... how convenient! Honestly, the whole thing hit me with a sense of disbelief. I believe the guy isn't dead but in a coma where he is having this unreal dream. If that is true, my rating should be higher but if not... this needs a redo. Funny enough, the grammar isn't that bad, just a few misspelled and wrong word choices here and there.

Idea was good but execution was poor First few chapters makes it clear it won't go far. Too much plot armour like Ownership of so many houses, an 11 year old kid made 50k by gambling and Its like reading a summary I did this and That and also too few words.

It's too rushed. There are tons of hp fanfic so if ur gonna make a hp fanfic you have to make sure you do it right and not just make into a template.

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I have read other work from the author and it is very unique amongst other Fan-fic and I like it but there are some grammatical errors here and there but nothing major. The story progresses a bit fast and the character growth is a bit slow I hope that the Author could squeeze in more chapters. And could flesh out the character more.

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I think the author is deleting bad reviews or something cause the grammar is horrible, the dialogue is horrible, the characters feel off, nothing has detail, it feels like there are parts of the story missing and there's just so much bs in it.

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