Dragon Ball Time Patrol: Universal Destruction
Just a story involving the Time Patrol and the many problems that come along with being a time patroller! this story is on pause until I'm done re writing the whole thing for now. Go Check out the remake I just dropped if you enjoyed this story its called Dragon Ball: Dimension Distortion.
This is one of my first works so i hope you're patient with it and enjoy my work!
PS: Please enjoy the story!, also don't be afraid to comment on how the story could be better ill take any ideas!
Be sure to check out the second part of this story!
Dragon ball Multiverse: Legacy!
leave a review if you enjoy!
Their also isn't just one Definitive MC!
Be Sure to leave a review i take all types of Criticism weather it be good or bad!
There are some Extra Chapters! They include,
Expert missions
Lost missions
Story Quest Missions
Side Missions or Comedic Relief
The Past
As always Enjoy the Story!
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this is my first project on this site please be respectful thats all i ask, if i made a mistake please point it out and i will do my best to correct it.
I gave such a low score because suddenly am tossed into dbz Universe and since i read some n watch some dbd so i understood a lik bit of this but otherwise Fresh people who havent wAtched or Read any dbz have no clue Who is who because their was no world building and i dont even know who the mc is oR his story because their was no character build. The fight scene also was written cheaply got to aDd some more into it but its underStanable since your knew nice try👍 like they say all writers begin small good luck On your quest for greatness 😎